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Read MoreThe falcon soars unlike ever beforeThy enamel stainedThy index fadedFight our battlesEvermore be hatedWhoever might take me will burn to ashesMy legacy's kept until the close will catch us Keep me saneI'll save my soul for youAll that I doI...
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So happy you enjoy it Fia!
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Read MoreI would be telling you a lie if I stated that I did not need a night out with my friends. Work is the usual hectic mess that it is. The peace and serenity I crave at home have...
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hello lovely Fia good evening you are an excellent story teller this is sexy and fun while being thrilling too 💕
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Thank you crimsin. That is so kind of you to say. I hope you like the rest of the story.
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Amazing write, you’re a fantastic storyteller my friend. Dig this, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you;)) cuz
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very nice. lookin forward to next part.
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Thank you Ambjr;))
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Talk about a steamy build up the suspense here if just strong as can be. And the dialogue flows perfectly like a bunch of ladies on a night out at the bar. And then the guys lining up with drinks for the protagnist is a surpising and original plot line. Fantastic opening.
John
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Thank you ☺️
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Drieks and
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Great arrangement, phenomenal lyrics as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for your kind words Damian!
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💕💕
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Read MoreThere is abuzzing to mybusyness.My mind refusesto be at ease.It happens when Itry toread or sleep.Doing Always.Where did theplayground go?I think it split forBrazil with thesquirrels.We are all nuts.
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I can’t sleep lately. I lay in bed hour after hour and wake up tired.
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I relate. Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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lol. I’m trying to accept your friend request. It’s giving me difficulty. I’m glad you are back.
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Oh do I know this feeling my friend. You put it well and with a bit of playfulness. Loved reading this. Put me in a nostalgic feeling for the places and people long gone.
John
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Drieks I love the beat that went this piece. I can easily put this on my music list.