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Read MorePlease hold me when the bombs drop. Till there’s no skin left on my flesh. Keep smiling till our time’s up. I need you close when I turn to ash.This war isn’t yours or mine but still ours for...
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Thank you Willow!
Just listened to the song you and Mary made on YouTube. My god it’s so good…
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An eye-opening write! Unfortunately true and real.
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Nice arrangement, and you’re just a phenomenal lyricist my friend. So relevant in present times, and so unfortunately true. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for your kind words Damian! 🙏🏻
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Outstanding!
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Thank you Adagio!
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Thank you so much Mary 🙏🏻
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Read MoreI open for no one.I choose.But when I want you,when the ache coils low and deep,I am the mouth that swallows your name.Between my thighs is no mysteryjust hunger,wet and waiting in the velvet bloomyou tremble to taste.Call it...
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Wow, that is hot.
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Thanks Fia….. powerful women are a real turn on.
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Okay, that’s one of the most incredible nods to someone I have EVER had the pleasure to read. Bravo!
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Thanks Willow….it’s just how I’d imagined a strong woman speaking.🌞🙏
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Read MoreOne of the first times Iwent to jail, it was inPolk County forpublic intox.Drunk in public.I was homeless for years,where else was I supposedto get drunk?They took me to thestation booked me, and gaveme my phonecall.I called the bail...
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You write this story with such clarity and weave it into an engaging scene that reaches out and rivets my attention. Great poem.
John
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Thank you, John.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it Damian
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You have expressed a real life tale with honesty and clarity.
I have been there. Got locked up for being drunk in public myself once.
I think I said to a police officer “Your a C…U…N…T. I didn’t say it i just spelt it out.
He didn’t understand. When he realised what I was saying I was thrown in the van.
I they took my clothes and gave me some grey prison scrubs. When I sobered up I started singing prison songs.
“He’s in the jailhouse now.” and Locked up by Akon. Some counties in England are stricker on booze than others. I have been out of my mind all over England, but Yorkshire was the place they locked me up. Don’t do it in Yorkshire.Thanks for sharing this poem. I am glad to know I am not the only one.
regards
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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This sounds like such a Midwest thing. Great telling of the night!
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lol. Thanks
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Thank you so much.
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Read MoreWhen heat rises off your body and it's not from Passion When you struggle to find the words any words because you lost your voice When tiny beads of sweat escape not from pores, indicating it's time The Great Wall of Fia...
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hello beautiful Fia I’m sorry you’re feeling icky I hope yu feel better soon drink some green tea with a little tumeric it should help 💕great write
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Thank you, crimsin. add the turmeric to the tea?
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make it like an english tea a little creamer, green tea, a half teaspoon of turmeric in the hot tea you will feel better the tumeric helps with body aches and you don’t tasted it in the tea…I know it sounds weird but it’s good…
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Thank you, Ravens:)
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Get well…..words need to be written.
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Thank you, Peter. Appreciate that
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Get well, Fia. Even when you’re sick, you write incredibly. Get so me rest my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Fia very sorry for your ailment. But you sure wrote a fantastic poem about it. Digs deep and you really made it an engaging read. Hope this comment finds you feeling better.
John
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Thank you, goldenmist
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Sickness is sometimes like love. You don’t know if your coming or going.
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Thank you, Casket. I sure did not know what was going on.
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Yes and yes, we do ache to be touched, we deserve to still be desired. Wholeheartedly agree, my gentle man.❤️
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Thank you for confirming my thoughts by commenting on my writing.
You must be of ‘a certain age’ to understand.
😘
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Wrinkles don’t kill the burn…that need still drives. Nicely done in so few words
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