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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
GOODNESS, TFT!
Now, THAT is a proper Sonnet … it’s obvious you’ve done your homework.
Your creativity sparks, emotion sings, and diction dances. And, I like your use of elision. Could use a bit’a punctuation.
See critique and edits below:I said I don’t do THIS. POems that behave (STRESS-STRESS / a count long)
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much appreciated. good luck convincin me to use punctuation 😉
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Now, Syr Bard
Post it so everyone can enjoy your amazing flexibility and creativity with a poet’s pen.
I’ll be first in line to review it for you! ⁓ Richard
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Read MoreStand in your own light—even when the lamps go out. Carry your silence like a lantern,not as a burden,but as a map. The world will tell youto wait for rescue,to lean on borrowed fire.Smile, and keep walking. Every step you takeis a...
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hello dearest poet this is truly beautifully written in its message and form ❤️
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Thank you so much, Crimsim. 🕊️🙏
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This is a good piece. “You were never walking alone,” nice line. Welcome to Stars Rite
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That line is both uplifting and encouraging. Thanks so much, Fia, for sharing your thoughts and the kind welcome. 🙏🕊️
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10/10
Excellent writing.
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Thank you, Peter. Now full marks are a scary thing. But that’s just me. You are most appreciated🙏🕊️
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A gentle and enduring Taoist quality flows through each and every word here. I can hear the bells of truth fervently ringing.
Having read this inspiring write, my own inner light is brighter and stronger. Thank you for the share!Clay
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Hey Clay, thanks so much. Glad to share in the light. 🕊️🙏
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“Every step you take
is a small rebellion.
Every breath you claim
is proof you are enough.”I can’t even tell you how much I needed to read this. And that right there…I read 5 times. Brilliant piece! Welcome to the Stars!
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Thanks for the kind welcome, dear Willow. Glad to have shared something for others. 🙏🕊️
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Will be posting up more as I get into the swing of things here. Thank you kindly. 🕊️🙏
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Powerfully penned, k. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. 🙏🏻🕊️
Freds
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Wise words left by a person who knows how and what to be: instinct versus chance OR
experience that’s lingered and fast becoming a good friend?!-
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Perhaps being a friend to self is quite a good thing and sets us up for being a good friend to others as well. Thank you kindly. 🕊️🙏
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Very encouraging words and writing… I pray we live by them… I wish life was as simple as… welcome to Starsrite
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That is a prayer of mine as well! Thank you so much, as well, for the kind welcome, Sam. 🙏🕊️
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That is a prayer of mine as well! Thank you so much, as well, for the kind welcome, Sam. 🙏🕊️
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