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Read MoreShe writes with a brutal hand,(there is no other way for the brutalized)truth sharpened to a stiletto pointher words crack skin,steal breath,open woundsand longing.Pages grow lustfully,ink turns to flesh,moans echo in strange tongues,and men stiffen in far-off rooms,their borders...
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This is a great “tribute” write. Accurate with its visuals that it creates
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Thank you Crimsin and Styxian.
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Aptly written, my friend. The poem sitting on the right somehow makes it perfect and even more poignant.
Clay
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Hoi hoi
Lured into this write by the artwork
The artwork is nice, but it’s the write that tells it all.
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The formatting of your poem gave me an “aha” moment. Now you’ve spoiled me for the left side of the page! Very impressionable lines throughout, like “a storm of naked syllables”. How I wish I had thought of that one. Do you prefer “Benny” or “Peter”? Let me know!
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Thanks Kelly….Peter or Benny doesn’t matter.
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Well said. I probably know of which women you speak about. All here are valuable in some way.
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Do I scare you? Lol. We are all damaged in some way. Some of us try to heal and those efforts may damage others. Everything pours out of me and I write it down. Most if it is “brutal” which is how I described my writing around 2000. Now I use “gritty”. You can empathize or just be thankful for the life you have. Most memories or thoughts can be put down to share.
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No….you don’t scare me and I appreciate your comment and the honesty in your writing.
Brutal or gritty has to be written as such.How else can the pain you have endured be conveyed?
That said, I can only imagine your life….you have lived it
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Excellent piece. I’ve read this poem twice and I can feel your passion & respect for her. Well said.
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Survivors demand our utmost respect.
Thanks for the nice comment.
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Cool stuff Fia !
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Thank you, Styxian.;)) Hope you have been doing well.
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I caught a bad case of covid last week! It kicked my ass! It went through my work and got a few of us. I’m all better now!
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Oh man you had the summer vid. I had that 3 weeks ago. I’m glad you’re better.
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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How exciting!! I’m late to the post but the video put me right there with ya!
Congrats amiga:)-
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Thank you Adel;))
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hello dearest Benny beautifully written honesty ❤️