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Brandon Houser wrote a new post
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Read MoreI think my pulse is upDanger all aroundHowling at a black moonWith all the hungry houndsCan you hear me callingCan you hear me screamI know it may be scaryBut I think I like this dreamDancing on the blade's edgeClose...
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Thanks!
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this had me on the edge intense write ❤️
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Thank you! I had fun writing it actually. And I loved riding that edge on the paper. It was kind of a kick. And people ended up responding to it well, so I am quite thankful.
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Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write with a lyrical vibe and an intensity to it my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I did sit and think someone could make an intense rocker with this. Thanks for reading!
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This has a song rhythm to it! Fantastic movement!
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Thank you Willow! 🙂
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NAVINA posted in the group National Poetry Month
THE GRAVITY OF THE GRUDGE
You see a person sentenceed to death
Days counted before their last breath
Done so much pain and unimaginable sorrow.Now the question is as follows…
Would you feed that person today,
What he or she wouldn’t be able to do tomorrow?Would you offer the mercy you’d hope to receive?
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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Read MoreI've got so many sidesinside and outside using chaos as my guideshowing me the waybecause babyI'm everything all encompassing  mixing it uptearing shit upI'll bring my shadesI'll bring my coolI'll bring my teethYou bring the warbecause babyI'm a fucking...
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Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.
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Hey Fia! Thanks chica!
I was in my feelzzz. Hahaha
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Take no prisoners!!! Forget fruits and veggies, bring me pizza and the finest wine!!! ha-ha-ha I’ll expose my kitty from the top of the white house and enjoy every second of it!!! You say stop, use caution? I say gun the motor and rip down the road….lol Grab the apples off the tree of life….I’ll eat every one….She’s ours lads and no one’s left to tell. ha-ha-ha.
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Dude! You made my evening with your comment. Hahaha
I wanted to write something different and edgy and I wanted to cuss. lol
It’s fun to let loose and just go with it and see where it goes.
And hell yeah, take no prisoners! Rrraaarrrrr.Hahaha you are too freaking cool amigo!
Rock on!
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hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️
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Hi Crimsin:)
Well thank you. I woke up and had that phrase in my head, Chaos in Color and wanted to
explore what I thought it looked and felt like. Turns out it feels pretty bad ass. HahaI’m so happy you are here on Starsrite. Truly.
You have inspired a lot of my writes on DUP and here.Thanks for stopping by!
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Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
We are way too goofy. But I love it.
Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
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Hey big sexy!
Yes, I woke up in a mood! Hahaha
After we got off FaceTime I started this write.You’re so cute in your glasses typing away. Hehehe
And I keep peeking at you too!I can’t wait to be
face to face
flesh to flesh
All that stuff that comes with you and me together in the same space:)
Love ya babe
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(I have to tighten up the headboard before you get back. We are killing it! What!)
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Hahahaha. Ssshhhh!
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Hell yeah, girl! Get it! 🔥
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Hi TK!
It’s so awesome to see you on my page!
How have you been!Yes, I was in a mood hahaha
Thanks for your snaps on my write amiga:)
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Damien!
Nope you are not alone! For me music opens doors in my mind when I’m writing.
It really does. It brings different tones or vibes to my write. Hope that makes sense:)
And please know I appreciate you too!Thanks for stopping by!
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Talk about a cataclysmic write! I bet this was fun to capture! 🙌
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Hi Willow.
It was fun. Sometimes when writing it’s also just as important to catch our adrenaline too.
My pulse was pumping with this write. Hahaha
Hope that makes sense!Thanks for stopping by!
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Dear A,
Chaos in color. Sounds like my closet and then my brain. But mostly my closet. My brain is largely grey matter. I’m off topic hang on…I’m back- I’m a fucking carnivore too! Shred it sister. I really dug this because it is edgy and it is raw. And it makes me want to ditch convention and just be feisty. Fabulous.
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Hi H!
I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
And I have seen your brain!
It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
You should have a little spice daily chica.
At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!Love ya and miss ya!
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Vivid and sharp.
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Hi Thomas!
Thank you! 🙏
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Tim wrote a new post
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Read MoreIt feels like such a shameall that laughter, conversation,all those ordinary afternoons together. They just lowered him into the groundlike a basket of rotting bread,carefully, as if it still mattered. I hate death.He’s so selfish -he arrives already decided,and leaves everything...
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I’m with you dearest Tim I hate death, the look of it, the feelings it brings the unfairness, I was watching a nature program about a grizzly cub and it’s mom she led him high into the snowy mountains but the incline was too steep for the cub he tried so many times to follow her just to land on the rocks below to die it made me cry it was unfair… great write ❤️
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Wow, that sounds awful. Even animals can be unobservant to their young, I guess. Thanks for the comment, Crimsin.
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This is deep.
Death is unfair and painful for loved ones. It absolutely feels unfinished.
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Thank you my pretty friend. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Another great write my friend. We all fear death. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much, Damian.
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This feels tender in its grief. The simplicity makes the hurt more real.
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Thanks for your comment, Curly.
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Wow my friend! This is a punchy and powerful view of death. Yes the unfinished business both between people and creatively that death leaves incomplete. If only we could have more time to finish our lives and do the things we set out to. And then there are the interpersonal relationships with unfinished business. Old wounded things that were never healed or forgiven between people. I know so well what your poem speaks of. You take the most important thing in life death and put it into a concise form that explores the crucial facets of death with great poetry.
John
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
Morning Coffee Thoughts
As the sun rose
on a calm summer morning,
and I faced the four directions,
asking for balance,
understanding,
and grandmother’s wisdom,
the Hawk circled
then landed on the Elm
down by Willow Creek.I thought at first
it was looking for its morning meal,
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It’s beautiful… Definitely relaxing to read and vision. ❤️
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Thinking of humanity as so small in the cosmos is both humbling and strangely empowering. For all that we are miniscule in the vastness, we can achieve so much through compassion.
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Excellent flow and rhyme scheme. You maintained the subject on point, throughout.
Well done.