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Read MoreFirst time I got laid,I was fifteen.Kim.Black hair and big breasts.I just knew I was in love.She fucked every one of my friends.My heart felt like it was hit by a truck.I wandered lonelyas the neon night. I wanted to...
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. The pain of a broken heart can often lead one into the arms of alcohol. It promises the world only to consume its host. Excellent write my friend, I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Those first moments of heartbreak are all consuming. I still remember mine like yesterday too…
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Yes, vivid and sharp. Thank you.
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Read MoreA question I ask myself is now.How could we back to friends?Why and how? By this point,we've gotten so close.And deep emotions arose.How could we go back to base one? As if I wasn't your number one?I still remember last of...
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This is very expressive and makes one think how one can go back to before. I like this.
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Read MoreThe Mexicans hated when the Spaniards and French said, "you people"Native Americans learned to hate these very same wordsThe term was placed on a historic reel and ran like a sequelTwo innocent words placed together and wished that they...
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Read MoreYou are no more than Hecate controlling your three weird sistersBut I refuse to be your Macbeth, I'm so much more sinisterStep to the fire bitch and enter Paradise LostYou are drawn to my depths, willing to sacrifice at...
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I love how you take this darker than expected. Nicely done
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It is good to taste the darkness here and there, it’s delish Lady
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Read MoreMy love returned to me today,after two weeks absent,poked and prodded by other hands.Her slender neck realigned straight and true,action lifted smooth as a lover's curve,that infernal buzzing G-string silenced at last.She needed time away to reclaim her voice,and...
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Into the book it belongs! Nothing quite like the bond of a guitar player and their axe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous. I can hear the chords now.
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You are so correct in comparing the guitar to a woman. Now, if I could just send my contrary wife off for a new set-up! Haven’t counted them lately, but I have over 20 acoustic guitars. Nice writing–I like it!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks for the like.
I could buy guitars just to admire them.
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Aww its funny how one remembers their first time. This is well written