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thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
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You are very welcome.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write that pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for feeling me so deeply ❤️
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Writing helps, remembering happy thoughts are healthy, suppressing afraid of darkened pain is a negative. Be healthy Lady and never forget, just don’t live in the pain
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thank you dearest Me I sometimes feel I felled him it is an overwhelming feeling ❤️
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.
endless night confession
breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
the nights we wasted tasted strange
cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchangeyou were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
old barroom lungs in borrowed light
we swore we’…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru
Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.
Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More
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I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More
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Ha-hahhhh!
That’s a given, M’Friend, but I’ll never give-up on ya. 🤓
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Read MoreShe dropped her robe.Naked and defenceless,she stood theredaring meto say something,to do something.But I couldn’t.I was rendered mute and immobileby the beauty before me.My eyes drank in everything,and my mind raced,pulling me backto another momentthe first timeher robe fell...
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Now that is want and reverence to the beauty of the female body. Nicely done
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Thanks Fia
All women are beautiful just some more than others.😜💋
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Beautifully penned, Peter. This is truly a glorious write my friend and I agree with you wholeheartedly. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The hips of passing years This is a gooder.
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Thanks for the comment Atticus.
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Read MoreAs we entered the chamber there was crackling underfoot Squeaks and scampering, lots of squishing underfoot We retreated for a flamethrower and we needed more light We needed to identify what in the fuck was creating our plight As we...
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The visual to your writing is really good. I see the whole picture
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It’s an old piece, but we still like it. Thanks Lady
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This is so very touching, Brenda.