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Read MoreAn Autumn Moon Night “Gonna get into it baby down where it’s tangled and dark... When we get through it baby you’re gonna give up your heart. Gonna get a little risky baby Oh, that’s my favorite part.” ~~Bonnie Raitt oooo When I first saw you the moon was...
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First, Thank You, Fia. I’m glad you liked this poem. Second, I am not sure it’s a ‘song’. I think to make it a song there would have to be a lot of editing, along with some experimentation. I am not sure I would know how to do this. The poem was written as I was listening to this Bonnie Raitt song, so besides quoting some of the lines found in that song, I think some of the rhythm of the song did find its way into the poem. But to be truthful, this was more an accident than intended.
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Read MoreEvery night... I cry when I sleep with no one to chase away the bad dreams, mend any of the hurts, the silent screams or the broken heart that continually bleeds. Time and again, when dreaded night comes, I cry in my sleep, grind my teeth...
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I feel this poem. Your emotions spilling over into the waking world due to a nightmare. Good piece
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Thank you 😊 because of the situation I’m in this is almost the norm for me.
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It’s good to have a good cry, even when it happens again and again, it cleanses the soul. I felt this poem. Bravo!
D.
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Thanks 😊
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Read MoreRewriting Memory I’ve said it many times, over, and over again Guilt is a needless load to carry forever The solution comes in asking for forgiveness Or you else can’t go on happily with new endeavors And though it’s all in the past you...
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That’s all we can do is get up and keep going.
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It’s within our nature.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, always appreciate your reads and comments.
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Some takes flight and others do die. Very interesting poem crimsin;)
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thank you lovely Fia I appreciate you ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian another underground poem I’m happy you enjoyed it ❤️
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
A KISS #4
“Let’s not speak falsely now
the hour is getting late.”
(Song/poem ‘Along The Watch Tower’, written and sung
by Bob Dylan. But in this case think/imagine this song
sung/played by Jimi Hendrix, the Live Version)“Excuse me while I kiss the sky”
-Jimi Hendrix, ‘Purple Haze’Th…Read More
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Is this a song? It’s cool. I like it