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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Senryu
HauntedA single tear drops
Haunted by her lost lover
Will always love him![Profile Photo]()
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Read MoreGrim was her mood as she storms about,Fetid feelings abound.Her secrets kept none to confide in,Her love scorn her affections,Leaving her with a derelict affliction. Cursed among maidens,Her future was bleak and barren,Like all that came before her.She was a...
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Fantastic, Missy Brenda. A whole lot of haunting going on
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio I love this thank you for allowing me to be a part ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda & Adagio. Incredible collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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thank you graciously from us both dearest Damian haunting is what we were going for I’m happy it spoke to you ❤️
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Chère C.,
Lovely write!
It freckles me a lot…Warm regards, Gua
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giggles thank you graciously dearest Gus ❤️
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I think to be “captivating” is as you say, “…is risky it comes with danger.” Oh, to be a “danger” in this way, to someone again…. “SIGH”. Crimsin, those last few words (“but honey so do I”), wonderful!! Dare I say, “CAPTIVATING”? 😎
Curt
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thank you graciously dearest Curt for a sexy comment ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you ❤️
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Lots of sexiness in your latest pieces Lady, tight
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thank you dearest Me for feeling me on this I appreciate you deeply ❤️
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Read Moreit doesn’t matter how I movehis eyes are lockedclocking how I walktracking each shift of my hipswatching my legs cross when I sithe sees...everythinghe's got that x-ray vision if there's one thing I've learned...I tell myself this...girl, just do what...
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Passionately penned, Willow. Excellent write my friend, this had a little R&B sass to it. Dig it. Nice arrangement with the rhythm section driving the vehicle as an accompaniment to these bars you’re slinging. It’s Fire!! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Interesting you use the word sass…my nickname as a child was Sassy. Guess it never faded. Thank you, my friend 😊
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WHOA!!! Willow, this is 100% passionate, sensual… sexy!!
Love this line: “fire infused and filled with intention”. I swear, as I read this line, I could feel Heat spreading out from the computer screen and melted my keyboard. WTH, now I have bandaged fingertips…😎 now where did I put that fire extinguisher??!! Loved the music and singing.. I give it 100 snaps, 10 Hell Yeses, and sway the hips danceable!Curt
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Well damn! That’s a lot! Much appreciated! I don’t have a fire extinguisher but Volupta routinely had me hitting the cold shower with her erotica. So I get it! Thank you, Curt 😊
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I read this without the music, then listened to it. Both ways show the heat you were trying to convey. I love the part where you say he loves your mind. It’s a potent thing.
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According to him, my body is banging but without my mind, it’s just anatomy. He never leaves me questioning my value in the space of us. Thank you, Fia 😊
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A great piece of dedication and spiciness, tight one Lady
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Thank you! He brings out the spicy in me 😊
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Full of passion and power. Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Brilliant work. Powerful.
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Thank you 😊
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Read Moremy solemn mood had nothing to do with youit was my inner girl singing the bluesa melody of sadnessstrung together with notes of painsubtle hints of what was troubling mewithout revealing itselfa twinge of guilta little hurtindiscrimanate feelings that...
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Well done, Brenda. I like this.
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio I didn’t write anything yesterday so I thought I would today I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, I know what it’s like to sing the blues. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you for feeling me on this ❤️
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Chère C.,
Breath everyday – write everyday.
But then, i don’t have this nice artwork.
With the whole picture you draw me in.Keep on keeping on, said Curtis.
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hello dearest Gus good morning I try to write everyday not everyday is great thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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good morning dearest Thomas hello thank you for showing me love on this ❤️
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You’ve strung together the notes of pain very well. Perhaps singing the blues can be just as cathartic as writing about them. We can only hope.
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thank you graciously lovely Kelly ❤️
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Those solem moods are tricky. We can’t always keep them locked down. And then others feel the dark coolness of their touch. Beautifully written, Brenda 🧡
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good evening beautiful Willow yes they are and they come from nowhere somtimes… thank you for the love here ❤️I wrote a poem called Nostalgia about you and other poets…
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