hello dearest poet I really enjoyed the style and subject matter here ❤️

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. This write hits like a Mack truck my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

Damian

Writes like this are quite difficult for the most of us. So few even try. Yet you did and you did it very well. The rhymes are solid and well thought out. Most of the cadence is kept moving fluidly. Along with an interesting storyline to boot.
Great job here. Your efforts paid off well.

incredibly penned…compelling. your imagery captivating,
you weave words with amazing fluidity. i too very much enjoyed your topic & style.
~ chantepleure

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend there are lots of layers in your work. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tight even down to the rhyme, to cool

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such an amazing tribute my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Really sad piece and we could see this while reading, Sad Lady

This is so very touching, Brenda.

You are very welcome.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Such a heartfelt write that pulled at these old heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Writing helps, remembering happy thoughts are healthy, suppressing afraid of darkened pain is a negative. Be healthy Lady and never forget, just don’t live in the pain