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    The Butterfly with the Artificial Wing

      I sit here in silence as I watch my mother go through the ceremonial lighting of the candle. This is not something bad; it is the norm for our family. Once a year, we all, the female patriarchy of...

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    • Brilliantly penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! This was incredible storytelling, and I even welled up with tears, I knew that the Butterfly and professor was a metaphor for something really going on. Powerful ending, the foreshadowing was precisely executed. Thank you for sharing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thanks, Damian. I was trying to think how a young person would convey what is going on in their own way. Not all of them come straight out and say anything.

    • Truly beautiful.

    • Marvelous write. Well done.

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    Rapid

    This piece is part of my 'Waterfall of words' series. I wrote this 3 years ago and its original title is; 'Poppy Cock'.I used to write stuff like this with DUP user Skyra when the site was still up....

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    Upon this page of poetry…. (to our craft)

    Upon this page of poetry….We write with hopeful hearts our songs,because it helps us right life’s wrongsand sets bound spirits soaring free,upon this page of poetry.It takes all kinds, in every form …there’s really no accepted norm,to spill life’s...

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    • You’re ever-so warmly welcome, Adira 🌷

      There’s nothing I cherish more than making a lovely lady happy and receiving her kiss in gratitude.
      Smiles ‘n hugs! ⁓ Rascal🖌

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    Back in the Kitchen: Slut Wife IV

    Back in the kitchen, I dusted the fish with cornmeal while the Fry Daddy heated. A thunderhead rolled in the distance. I watched through the window as black clouds covered the sky, flashes of lightning and ominous rumbles.The door...

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    • Passionately penned, DK. Really good dialogue my friend, and it’s use of telling a story through their interactions. Of course you always bring the heat with your erotica. Fantastic chapter. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you, Damian. I’m glad the dialogue works. Thanks for following along on this one!
        xoxo

    • Na… it’s a free offering and catharsis. I’m glad you like it!
      xoxo

    • Superb work, you dirty girl. You need spanked. lol

    • Damn YOU!

      You’ve stripped me of my resolve to resist being jealous of another writer’s skills, fundamentally allocating myself to second rate status … still, honesty is honesty, and all I can honestly admit is how I now yearn to write as skillfully as You! C’est la vie!

      Okay, Lady, I’m addicted! Why deny it, when it’s so obvious by this recurring, throbbing bulge, labored breath, and repeated trips to lower the thermostat setting?

      Hm? I can’t even begin to guess what’s next … well, I’ll just have to try and catch a few winks of sleep between now ‘n then!
      “Til next time, your smitten fan! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      BTW: Love the photos throughout!

      • Just stop with the ‘second rate’ crap. You know you’re a literary majesty, so knight me with your scepter. I’ve been dying to kneel before you.

        Photos? I’m trying to keep those publicly acceptable, even if my stories are not. It’s a challenge.

        Thanks for reading this, Richard!

        xoxoxo

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    The Judge Made Me Get A Divorce

    Meeting up with the ladies at the bar to blow off some steam on a Friday night. It's supposed to be a relaxing night but instead it turned into this conversation.Hello ladies, and welcome to the Do It Right...

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    • Phenomenal storytelling, Fia. Always love your dialogue it’s very authentic my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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