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Read Morestir the spirit's mists then callit is callously you announce yourselftender of spirit I tune you outbreathing down my back thinking I won't bitecivility is for those civilhunted grace, I am guardedmortal grin then spityou're at war with yourself...
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thank you from you both dearest Gus and friend ❤️
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![Profile picture of Duhsjaak]()
On second thoughts:
The compass points North.
We call that orientation, but the orient is in the east.
If I look west, there’s the North Sea
So it’s only natural for me to look south, now and again. And again.I Love this…
Your poem makes me wonder…
Kind regards, Gus-
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thank you dearest Gus I appreciate you and your curiousity ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Classy and scary. Such great craft from you. 🙂
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thank you graciously dearest Jim ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for showing me love on even my blackened offerings ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
I’m old and still having fun – maybe not in the pit but… 😉
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good afternoon dearest Jim yeah me too thank you I hope you’re enjoying your day ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
I feel a strong commonality here with you. Am I off base?
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no not at all I’m sure we have a lot in common being older free spirits ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Good to hear
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![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
Great writing, dear Crimsin! Your mind and your memories are yours and yours alone. Stay always true and authentic, this is your precious gift to the world!
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hello beautiful Elke thank you for feeling me on this vibe its appreciated ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you so much Fia! 🙏🏻
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![Profile picture of FlatDaddy]()
This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?
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Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian 🙏🏻
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FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!
Curt
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
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![Profile picture of Tim]()
The voice in our head, the legions that rule can take over if we’re not careful. I fight my own war when negative self-talk invades.
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hello dearest Tim I am fortunate actually it took many miracles to get me to this age so many brushes with death…nature is beautiful to look at I guess I just have to remember my time will come no matter where I am and all I can do is do my best until then I am just feeling my mortality thank you my friend ❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Vivid and sharp. Fantastic work.
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good morning dearest Thomas thank you graciously for the understanding and lovely comment ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
Not wanting to offend
What had happened on the roofHolding pasts in a box
We crawl, we stand, then walk
Rusty keys enter locks
Speaking words before caughtStreams of tears without sound
Lover’s end, rings withdrawn
heartbeat forever unbound
Dawn shows you were a p…Read More2 Comments-
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Okay, Fia 👌 Thanks for your submission and participation. You’ve made a very good start, with the basic format of a Sonnet down pat … 3 Quatrains and a Rhyming Couplet, and your rhyme-scheme is spot-on. In particular, your topic is interesting, with emotion depth, strong metaphorical imagery, and captivating ambiance that sets the mood. With a b…Read More
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Thank you
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Chère C.,
A friend of mine wished me a blessed Friday.
I’ve come to absorb your words, art work and waive half of her well wishes to you…
Kind regards, Gus