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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Thank you,Peter;))
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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![Profile picture of Benjamin Scraps]()
Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
Regards James-
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreI Indiana Jones'd my depressionWith fake smiles and aggressionNo spores of joy in sight to teach me counter lessonsSporadic sessions of anxiety suppressionAnother forced excursion to divert the world from questioningIn actualityThis evil king is suppressing meBut in a...
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This had me moving. The riff is good, and the music went well with it.
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Always a pleasure to read your opinion Fia! Thank you so much!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Your arrangements always fit your words tightly. Excellent work.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the kind words Damian!
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Oh Lordy! You’ve done it again.
It’s like you know what melody/hook to use depending on the tone of the lyrics.
Where to emphasize your message. I listened to this when you posted but didn’t know how to reply.
I was at a loss of words! That is rare! Hahaha
Much respect chica!
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Thank you Adelphina! It’s a lot of trial and error but I warms my heart to hear people appreciate it. I’ll keep at it and hope to keep improving along the way. Have a wonderful day!
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Thank you! ❤️
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You’re a beast at this thing Lady, to freaking Tight
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Thank you! More coming in a few days (hopefully)
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This i awesome. I somehow talked Fia into getting a Spoken Word group going (actually, I kind of bamboozled her into it). HER wants to join and she suggested we get Willow and you as well. After listening to this, I feel really out of my league. I’m a lifelong entertainer, but mostly in theater. When I started writing for performance, I had no music, just me, so that’s what I’ve been doing. But you would bring some real class to the group, and if we do this right, we can build something outstanding for all of us. Interested?
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Hey, what happened to the audio? I sent a link to this page to a friend and he told me no song was here, so I came back — and it’s gone! Please put it back.
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Apparently because of an update on the site, all audio on all posts got removed sadly. I hope I have time tomorrow to upload the audio again on all my songs.
In the meantime you can listen to the songs on my YouTube channel if you’d like: youtube.com/@Drieks
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That I would like. So tell me, would you like to join the Spoken Word Group? You would be a very welcome member, and I think we can all benefit from each other.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSpeak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
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Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian,))
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I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Thank you Styxian;))
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Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
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Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Read MoreUpon the sharpest Hook moon of fright Answering the call Of a newborn nightSummoning inside this Rusted metal shed Surrounded by misted Red air of dread Remnants of lovers From who I...
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Yes..vampires, werewolves and the goes bump on hollioween..
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Thanks Fia! I wanted it to sound almost like a lullaby. lol
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Hello, can I interest you in a Frankenstein type guy? LOL.
I love when you get all voracious! This is a dare ya write, you know!
Okay okay. Enchanting write, Vampira! I love the aggressiveness of it, the baring of fangs and display of an appetite for human consumption…
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I was in the mood after reading all the fun stuff
And you are just my type mister. Perfect. 😍
I’m glad I enchanted you with my fangs!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damien!
I enjoy fantasy horror.
I love Van Helsing! The one with Hugh Jackman.
And The Mummy with Brendon Fraser.Thanks for checking this out amigo!
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Nice and spooky for the Halloween season. 🙂
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Tis the season Tim!
Now I need a huge bag of Snickers and Twix! HahahaLater gator!
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Even though I am not a huge fan of Halloween, this is pretty cool .. in fact it’s bloody much better than that .. Neville 🐈⬛🖤🐧😎👍
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Nev, amigo!
When I think of Halloween I remember getting on the tailgate of my dad’s truck with my friends to go trick or treating.
Some of my best memories. We would do each other’s makeup and have a blast. lol
There are a few neighborhoods in my hometown that still go all. People will park a block away and walk with their kids up and down the neighborhood.I’m glad you enjoyed the write! Now go take advantage of all the awesome chocolate varieties on Halloween 🎃
Snickers & Twix! Even the Reese’s peanut butter cups are cool:)-
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You can beat an egg and a drum but you can’t beat a Twix can ya eh’ 😎👍
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Oh! This is good.
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Thank you!
I wanted it to sound like a dark tale from Disney. lol
Hope that made sense!
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Tis the season for the undead. Great ink.
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Thank you! It was fun to write!
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An interesting write, suitable for the season.
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Well hello there Mr. FlatDaddy!
I wrote this around three years ago. I was in a vampy witchy mood. lol
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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Powerful stuff Fia