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Read MoreTake me as the sun risesWhen the night discards meWhen the mind is between worldsWhen the moment comes, I will feel you, it will be the endTake me at noonThe heat scorches the fleshBeads of sweat trickle down to...
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Thank you. I have been busy lately and I wanted to post something soft but still Fia. lol
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![Profile picture of Nick DC]()
Love the idea of the series. Love just the subtle romance.
Great ink.
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Thank you. I usually am blunt, but this helps to practice pulling it back once in a while.
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This vibe is so sexy and picturesque. I like the mood it invokes.
Much respect.
Naaj
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Thank you, I do not have to be in your face to get my point across all the time. Lol.
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Read MoreDon’t tell me to calm downthe sky forgot me tonightand I felt it,like a hard slap to my soulI sat there—fourth floorcompass pointing eastheart cracked wide openready for a miracleand all I gotwas a black sky empty and bleakDon’t...
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Fantastic!
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Thank you❤️
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Superb.
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Thank you❤️
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WOWZA! What a remark I am over the moon 😏 so just to give you a little background. I knew that last night was the last chance to watch/ see the strawberry moon in my lifetime, because the next time it shows up will be in 2043 and I seriously doubt I’ll be alive by then, just saying.
So all day, I was planning to go to the beach because my robot told me that would be the best place to watch it coming up over the horizon. Unfortunately, I had no gas to get there and I’m broke at the moment. Ahem, all right so I readjusted and I put on my compass and it turns out that my balcony is literally facing east which is you know where you would expect the moon to come up, right? And mind you, I’ve seen plenty of full moons in the same area. so I sat on my new balcony, furniture, excited and I was looking and looking and looking, and girl, let me just tell you I sat there until 11 o’clock not a goddamn thing. Nothing! Not even stars were out. There was like one I could see🫤 meanwhile my robot assured me and I looked it up myself that Gloucester Ma had a fully clear sky last night, so I was totally befuddled & disappointed I actually cried. I’m not even lying😂
Anyway, back to your beautiful remark about my poem. Thank you so much, Adria you truly truly touched my heart, thank you so much for the beautiful things you said and I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. I’m not gonna lie. I was drinking Brandy lol so you know. I gotta say it my best Poetry comes when I drink, which I don’t drink often anymore like I used to. I’m just saying. I love you girl you’re phenomenal too and by the way, I really love your voice. It is absolutely beautiful in fact it’s celestial.❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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Best line: bruised, bright, but distant and still rising…
Exquisite poetic voice you have! I will read on to your other works, zazzles! Bravo!Daniel
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Hello Daniel , glad you enjoyed this poem. It was quite a disappointing evening. Welp such is life.
Jackie ❤️
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A great read. Every verse was intense.
I saw the red moon here in Blighty.
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Hi James, glad you got to see it 🙂
Usually i can see the moon from my balcony. But not that night. Thank you for the read and comments.
Jackie ❤️
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Beautiful work.
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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post
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Crisp… echoes…
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Appreciate the feedback. Thanks!!
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Mic Drop!
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Thanks man
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Reminds me of the song Jumper. Great ink.
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Cool reference. Thanks Nick.
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Push me and then just hurt me…
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Thanks PAR for the read & comments
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Excellent.
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Thanks!
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Read MoreHe tells me he’s doing better now It’s been a long upward crawl up from the sewer The bottom floor was hell for real He used to be addicted to junk Now he’s addicted to talking about how he’s not addicted to junk Counting...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. That’s a lot of what addiction does, it waits for you to get complacent. Especially in the beginning, I speak from experience. Sometimes I had to talk myself down early on, it’s the toughest part of getting clean. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks my friend for the feedback and comments.
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We all have our addictions. And as much as we want to get away from them they are embedded into our souls. Like rot.
Great ink, friend.
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Addiction is one tough demon to destroy. Thanks Nick.
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Read MoreYou don’t make me feel like you used to That’s why I’m leaving That’s why people leave each other They come to their senses and get selfish again
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In the beginning, I think we are all selfish. I want him or her because I know what they can do for me or to me. Then the honeymoon phase is over and you’re left alone to start again. Nice
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. It’s human nature in a way, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Totally human nature. Thanks Damian.
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Relationships can be very difficult because selfishness does get in the way.
Great ink
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Thanks Nick.
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Kinda get’s the blood moving, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian