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    Me first.

    I want to die before you so I won't miss your faults or risk loving them even more.   What a selfish man you married.  

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    • That is a selfish thought/ relatable. I know people who said they would want to leave before their spouse. Especially when they have been with them a long time.

    • I really like this. Sometimes I think about this sort of thing and some people just don’t get it. They think it’s weird or morbid. 😅

    • hello dearest Benny I want to die first because I know my husband will be fine with me and not so much me if he died first we all have our reasons I don’t think it selfish 💕

    • This is sweet, and I agree with Crimsin, not truly selfish. Ideally, Lovers should be able to die at exactly the same time.

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    Repainting Sessions

    1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...

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    • Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
      It is not about painting, I agree. nice work

      • External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.

        Thank you Fia! “)

    • Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.

    • Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3

    • This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.

    • Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)

    • This is deeply, thought-provoking.

      I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.

      It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.

      Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x

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    Feeling The Burn

    The Earth has always had a planShe shifts continents like furniturestirs storms in her sleepstarts over when she feels like itShe doesn’t need permissionShe doesn’t need usNo, we didn’t cause all thisThe Earth has her own cyclesher own rhythmShe...

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    • Powerfully penned, Zazzles. Reminds me of an old George Carlin bit, when it comes to shaking us off like a bad case of fleas. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Sorry it took so long to reply back to you Damian. Yeah I remember that skit from George Colin. He was one of the greatest.
        Thank you for visiting my friend
        Jackie xo

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