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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

My mood mimics the moon

Poetry, Uncategorized

August 10, 2025

15

It starts off full and swelling bursting at the seams as if it will engulf the world in its beauty Slowly, ever so slowlyIt begins to disappearAnd shadow creeps in I secretly prayed for it to stay To embrace me in its warmthMy prayers...

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15 Comments
- M.E
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  A good write! I loved your moon analogy. “)
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Me;))
- Willow
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  When we’re linked to the moon’s tides…it can get overwhelming. I’m a full-on moon child myself, I get it
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Willow;))
- Green
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I loved how visual this was, but also in a very subtle way. I could see the sort of waxing and waning pattern but at the same time we weren’t talking about a literal moon, so it was a weird kind of take this very visual thing and make it into a feeling. And then it’s all wrapped up in really beautiful language.
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Green;))
- Styxian
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  The other morning, I was in a very sexual dream. it was intense! And then my alarm went off and scared the absolute hell outta me. Talk about a rip-off!
  Your words reminded me of my own misfortune. LOL
  I hope that there is success from your dilemma soon!
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    I was looking out the window at the moon and my mind just went with it. Thank you, Styxian ;))
- Tim
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  An excellent metaphorical take, Fia. Love it.
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Tim;))
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Damian:))
- NAAJIR
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  The ebb and flow of the man/woman dynamic.
  
  I digs this
  
  Much respect
  
  Naaj
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Naaj;))
- Thomas W. Case
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Superb work.
RPM wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

Silent Surrender

Erotica, Poetry, Romance

August 10, 2025

14

She slept turned gently on her side,Her back to him, her breathing deep.He lay behind her, hands still tiedBy fear and years and broken sleep.He longed to touch, to press, to feelThe shape he’d loved so long ago.But silence...

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13 Comments
- Daniel Long
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Outstanding! One of the best poems I’ve read all n starsrite… and I mean that. Into the list it goes! Will be checking out your other work.
  
  Daniel
  - RPM
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks for the amazing comment, you made my day!
- Poetspeak
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Echo the others
  This is how erotica is written
  
  Bravo !
  - RPM
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Poetspeak. I’m grateful that you spent time to read and comment.
- Styxian
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I steer clear of porn for the most part. But this is not that. It has taste and intrigue. It’s a thoroughly enthralling read. Well done.
  - RPM
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much. I know I have the tendency to straddle the line between erotica and porn, so I am appreciative of your comment.
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Passionately penned, RPM. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - RPM
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Damien! I value your support.
- Willow
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  This was a moment in time, very precious, captured beautifully
  - RPM
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you for your precious comment! Much appreciated!
- RPM
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thank you so much. I am very grateful for the comment!
- NAAJIR
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  ” The years had left some tangled vines—
  But still, tonight, they chose to choose.”
  
  Mic drop.
  
  Much respect
  
  Naaj
  - RPM
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you…honored that you would read and comment
Cipher wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

Here, to break the days of the now

Poetry

August 10, 2025

6

Time’s sands, slipping through hands. Halo of fading light, the cold of the depth of nightDark halo as portal to the great below. How One could just Slip Away, lips pressed upon a Dark array of the broken day -Consciousness...

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6 Comments
- Poetspeak
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  We have no choice but to be here ..
  
  Poets write sometimes in order to avoid Last Rites
  
  BIG
  LIKE
  
  Read twice
  Hit me different second time around as the bartender was calling for last round ..
  - Cipher
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you PS… Much appreciated
    
    #Cheers
- Willow
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Like PoetSpeak, I read this one twice. It has the feeling of a bell rolling in the mist. That question at the end…if you get an answer, I would like in on the knowledge
  - Cipher
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you Willow…
    
    <#3
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Cipher. This is a deep write my friend, lots of layers. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- emmagreen
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  ‘Light lies
  in
  bright
  eyes. Captured in forward and backward enrapture. The light
  of
  life. The seeming meaning
  in the
  dreaming. ‘
  A core of words needing a home, thoughts laid, meanings personal yet to share. Takes hold on the second read.
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

Acquitting Sin

Poetry

August 10, 2025

16

Screams are amplified inside the chamberInsults are hurled before any intent is shownThey speak of harming their leftist neighborWhile calloused hearts become hard as stone Hate-speak echoes off cold desperate wallsEnvious egos grow bitter before turning sour Hanging judges fill...

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15 Comments
- Paula Jobi
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Right from the X posts to the Headlines. Radical right meets radical left – everyone in between pays the price! I’m going to end here but I’m coming back with a link to one I wrote.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading, Paula. This write is just an observation, it’s not about left or right, blue or red, donkey or elephant to me. It’s more good vs. evil in my opinion. It’s about wealthy vs. poor. Most politicians are owned by someone, a corporation, a wealthy 1% family. Sure I used the word leftist, but it can be whatever at the end of the day. But that was the flavor I was going for was money and power equals no accountability. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Paula Jobi
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Feel The Noise
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Great write, Paula. Chaos is running rampant in the world these days. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Damian great write but the buffoons that run the world aren’t listening.
  Too busy making money by any means possible.
  Lies have become the truth and truth lies.
  Orwell saw it coming.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree they aren’t listening, and making billions. We’re going to have Trillionaire’s soon, corruption is all that’s trickling down in the end. It is topsy-turvy, everything has been turned on it’s head. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  It doesn’t surprise me that rich people try to screw over the poor. What surprises me is how many people are so happy to get screwed while complaining that they have hard lives. They want war. They want blood because some people disagree or just tell them reality. It’s wild.
  
  Great ink
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It seems the more I observe humanity, that there are people who look for scapegoats, especially the wealthy 1%. Such vampires. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Poetspeak
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  “To live outside the law you must be honest”
  
  …….. bob dylan
  
  Song: Absolutely Sweet Marie
  
  When there’s so words of my own to describe something I go back to the Master
  
  That’s happening a lot lately …
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love the Dylan quote. Great song as well. Can’t go wrong with Mr. Zimmerman. I get spells of that sometimes. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I believe this one will only continue to become more relevant as long as they wealthy hold the keys to freedom. Unfortunately. An reverse Robin Hood situation we got going on. I swe things happening & quietly write down my suspicion on their next crime. I wish I wasn’t right so often. And you…prophet. I hope it’s not too late & the scales can still be tipped, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I couldn’t agree with you more. It is Robin Hood in reverse. The world has gone all topsy-turvy lately, the lines are blurred. I wish I wasn’t right so often, actually I would loved to be proved wrong on a lot of things. I hope so as well my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Superb work.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

Heroine

Poetry

August 9, 2025

4

She's not my role model but she is my hero.She cooks and cleans and works and meets with friends and family and organizes everything.She goes above and beyond and sacrifices sleep and rest to keep the family machine moving.She...

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4 Comments
- Paula Jobi
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Awesome. More men should feel that way.
  - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks for liking Paula.
    
    I can’t imagine I’m the only guy out there that has a wife for a hero.Some guys just haven’t suffered enough to know what a hero looks like.
    
    There are a few people that post here that are heroic indeed….you included.I say that only from what I read between the lines.
    💋
- Poetspeak
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Frigging phenomenal tribute to your wife
  
  Does she have a name ?
  
  Maybe in Part 2 ?
  
  BIG LIKE
  - Backdeckbenny (Peter)
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    No part 2 but her name is Melinda..glad you liked it.
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