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Read MoreIn the grip of winterImpending dreadThe opposing army seized their homeFought them hard and with honorCritical madness All of his family slaughteredDisemboweledStillborn removedTorchedCharred remains He was the last survivorBarely endured the massacreRidden with diseaseSevered survivalGasping for airOn life support A vacant coffin...
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Thanks Fia. Appreciate it.
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No one every really wins at war. It is just useless devastation and loss of lives.
This is an impressive portrait showing that.
And no one really survives. Even the survivors suffer so much mental and emotional loss.
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Absolutely. The only winners are the governments of the world. Thanks Jacob.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. The casualties of war extend farther than those who gave their life, others are scarred physically and mentally for the rest of their existence. With Governments that discard them, after they’ve been broken by war. Sad but true my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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No one comes out unharmed. It’s a shame we here about so much of it time & time again. No matter what part of the world or decade, war rears it’s ugly head. Thanks my friend.
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Tremendous work. RiGHT ON MAN.
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Thank you Thomas for the awesome feedback!
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Read MoreGood Morning, You did one thing wrong, you woke upIf I haven't told you beforeI'm tired of this rut As my stomach turnsAcid reflux burnsI know exactly what I must do Do you know how I feel? when you devour a mealGo look...
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Welcome back
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Thanks dude.
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Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.
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Hello PAR. Appreciate the comments.
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hi Keith this is very honest❤
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Nice to hear from you Brenda. Thank you..xo
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If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
simply broke the mirror.
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HA! Yeah Krispy Kreme’s are good. That mirror has been broken for a long time. No need to fix. Thanks Jacob. Appreciate it!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. Appreciate the comment.
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This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo-
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Hello Sappho. You’re right. There is no love left here in this relationship. Only criticism and mockery. A wonderful observation only you can deliver my awesome friend.
Peace..xoxoxxo
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Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
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DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!
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Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write
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True. Appreciate the feedback.
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Read MoreI offer myself to you twice a day,at morning’s opening, at night’s soft closure an endless vow that neither time nor agecan strip away.I know the reasons you reject my offer:weariness dragging, desire gone quiet,the body’s shifting tides,the cooling...
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Lucky you 💋
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That’s a stimulating offer if your a woman. I hope you received many. Cool write.
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Loved this piece…the offer, the pain, the excitement, and the hope of it all!
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Read MoreStrum me a lullabyto keep my mind at easeHold each note as it criestill I begin to sleepEach note is a storypressed and released in timeHold each fret in its gloryMove it slightly up or down. DevinePlay it soft...
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A touching tribute to music and musician. This may be the best compliment that a guitar player could ever expect. A feeling of peace and satisfaction is elicited in me.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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When I’m practicing guitar a little later, I’ll play you a few bars. 😉
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Aww thank you;))
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In G I’m thinking. 😉
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Maybe on a minor key?
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Oh my… Choices. lol
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Excellent poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim
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Now that was a song all on its own!
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Thank you, Willow ;)) <3
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Oh, my–are you talking to me? I’m being silly, of course. I’ve been playing guitar for a long time, so these words have special meaning. I love the image of this damsel being moved by the sound of the strings. Who knows what will happen at intermission?
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Oh Sam… Intermission is where the stories are created. Thank you
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This flows like a melody. Great piece Fia.
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Thank you so much ;))
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Very nicely poemed Ma’am .. Neville
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I always loved this one, cuz. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian;))
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Succinctly sorrowful but deeply meaningful .. Neville
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Wow, I felt this. Very powerful write.