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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Four minutes left
Just like my words
Leaving me in my time of need
It does not matter what I do because the words wont come out
Two minutes left
I am done for and its for the best
Its pressure on top of pressure
No more time….
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Read MoreFour minutes left Just like my words Leaving me in my time of need It does not matter what I do because the words wont come out Two minutes left I am done for and its for the best Its pressure on top of pressure No...
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Thank you Damian;))
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Hope you’re ok😘
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thank you Peter. I am alright;)
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A clever verse in the nick of time, Fia – you’re always different, forever intriguing. HJx
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Thank you Hj. xo
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Still going. We’re over the halfway bump now!
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I know willow. This is my first time doing this. Now I know what you meant by exhausting;))
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GREAT! To the point and marvelous!
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Read MoreDesperation fuels chaos in the streets While false idols continue to make war Honest poets keep writing the receipts That’s right we’ve been keeping score Someday soon judgment catches us all Pride hits hardest when forced to crawl Evil people are cowards speaking in lies Hiding...
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Amen…
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Thanks for reading and your kind words, Sam. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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i think this rings true today as it did then. nicely penned, Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, you did it again. made it into the Fia book.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m honored to make it into the book my friend. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thanks for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a ripple effect for sure. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Raise a marshmallow to soon! It’s well past time. And again, another one that fits as well as the day it was mused, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Raising a marshmallow to soon! Unfortunately it fits because things have gotten worse, but us poets and poetesses are quite good at keeping account of all the receipts. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Great piece Damian. You’re the spokesperson for the demise of our country. This piece is remarkable.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Oh no! You mean I’m the deliverer of bad news? lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work, my friend. Excellent.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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While false idols continue to make war, this work summons a Jesus who refuses salvation and a Non‑Jesus who refuses erasure. They move like twin shadows, circling the wound the world keeps reopening. Nothing here seeks redemption. Instead, the performance asks who is allowed to carry a name that has been used to bless both mercy and violence. The ritual is not an answer, it is a reckoning.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, PAR. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s a deep analysis brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damn. I read several gut punches this morning, but, my friend, I think I will stop at yours because no other gut punch will top this one for now. Powerful read. Great stuff!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Another great piece my friend. It’s a madness that doesn’t seem to end.
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Thank you so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It doesn’t seem to end, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Strong, strong, well done ink Damian.
Bat
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, the sheer velocity of this as it rocketed through the false prophets that surround us and unveiled their true nature showed them for what the are. The rich man not having a crumb under the table for the poor and taking them for all they have. I could both feel and see this through the unflinching eyes of the great poet you are. You told it like it truly is behind the smoke screens. Appreciate you.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m kinda of obsessed with the truth that hides behind the smokescreens. I feel the obligation to expose what lies were meant to remain hidden I guess, always have, even as a younger poet. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Honor, Respect, Loyalty
Honor was not just a word
It was inner compass
Felt deep within
Respect is earned
Not demanded like a spoiled brat
Given willing
Loyalty is fleeting
What once was sort out
Is now blown away like a puff of smoke
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Read MoreHonor was not just a word It was inner compass Felt deep within Respect is earned Not demanded like a spoiled brat Given willing Loyalty is fleeting What once was sort out Is now blown away like a puff of smoke
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Powerfully penned, Fia. An excellent musing my friend. Nothing wrong with watching old karate movies. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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I don’t remember ever watching old karate movies. But I feel the message in this
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Honor Loyalty and Respect are all earned and very easy to lose.
Great work 👏
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A fine musing, Fia. Amazing under pressure write my friend. You’re clutch. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian