Detritus

Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

You want a Session?

Erotica, Uncategorized

June 6, 2025

10

Why don’t you come up to my room No one has to know what we do I promised to give you the ultimate ride Slick and ready, slide inside You want me to get on all fours So you can have access to my...

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9 Comments
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  The last line hahahaha 😆
  Therapeutic sex all the way!!!!
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Hahaha thanks Daniel;))
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  For you..no need to ask. Thank you xoxo
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Haha. Yeah, got to love the Hussle. Great ink.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    lol right. Thank you, Nick;))
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Fia. As per normal you know how to heat up the kickoff to the weekend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian. I do try. lol;))
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I could only smile at the ending. Seems like he had you effed up. Haha. Slick writing. I likes 👍
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Haha I watched it on YouTube.
    Thank Naaj;))
ReggiePoet wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Another Suitcase

Humor, Poetry

June 6, 2025

2

Another Suitcase Another glum speech in a scripted town hall Won’t solve the world’s problems today We’ve grown too enamored of media brawls And corruption inside the beltway Another news pollster committing his fraud He convinced me to love what I...

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2 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Reggie. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- ReggiePoet
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you!
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Pill

Poetry

June 6, 2025

12

Bloodshot eyes stare wildly Just looking for a reasonChemicals come on mildly Within the mystic season Watching stars drift slowlyI cast my gaze inwardWalking amongst the lowlyMy skin feels awkward Panic races through fearWalking across the wireMuted sound going clearAs my pulse spikes...

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11 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Pills are dangerous. This piece was written with power & a great performance here. Well done!
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That they are, I know from experience. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Detritus
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  How seductive the call of pharmaceuticals. Health, happiness, sanity.. all disintegrated by one seemingly harmless cure.
  Excellent write, my friend!
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Detritus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They’d have you think, they wanna get people hooked. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I am sure he would be impressed by your ability to adapt to his style, which is not easy. This has a good flow and rapid pace
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I released it on DU, he commented on it, I think it was with approval. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  He does have a machine gun style, doesn’t he? Quick bites! It doesn’t seem to matter what style you’re using, you always manage to bring it home on point, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well thank you, I try, I try. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He saw it on DU, I think he approved, if I remember right. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I like this style. Reminds me of a poet I knew. I think his name was JustDave. He had a bit of this style as well. Great ink.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool, yeah I’ve seen this style around a few times. Not too often though. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Field of Scavengers: Part Five

Action & Adventure, Horror, Science Fiction & Fantasy, Short Stories, Uncategorized

June 5, 2025

0

"The bad boys, mommy! The bad boys!" Chloe cried as she sat concealed in the hidden room her father had constructed. The hidden door, which lead in from the kitchen, creaked open. Chloe gasped. "Chloe?"...

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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

A Boy and a Gun

Poetry, Short Stories

June 5, 2025

11

She came home from her jobNot a great job, but a jobHer husband has been unemployed for 3 yearsSays he's looking for the right job to make a name for himselfThey don't have enough money to feed themselves and...

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9 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you.
- Willow
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  The terrifying thing about these almost disturbing pieces is that they read with such (pardon the pun) deadly accuracy & far too much semblance of reality to them. Damn
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    I try to capture the play by play and to get the reader inside that room with these individuals. Thanks Willow for the kind words.
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I sometimes think people try to hide that there are really bad upbringings. My father wasn’t abusive but I did have a rough childhood. I seen plenty of families that were basically this.
  
  Yeah, that mother fucker deserved it. Great ink.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Glad you enjoyed Nick. Thanks.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks Adira. About publishing, maybe one day.
- PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This one is so bloody good…
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you my dear friend. Peace to you PAR.
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