Beautifully penned, Fia. This had such an uplifting vibe my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

This kinda rocks in a deliciously love poem kinda way .. fingers crossed for the future .. Neville

Dope!! ’nuff said!!

Much respect

Naaj

Chère F.,
A subtle prayer
A declaration of love
Is all that I am
Thinking of….

You are a class of/on your own (what do I know of your language?)

And this question answer format is a beautiful find.
Needless to say I love it to bits.
Warm regards, Gus

This reminds me of classic poetry from the early 1900’s. It has that feel and language. Nice one,, Fia.

This is such a sigh-worthy piece. I think most of us embark on that journey with these hopes. For some, it lasts. For others…not so much. I love the fierce optimism in this one

Fia, this is a jubilant celebration of love that you paint with lyrical wonder. I enjoyed this so much my heart sang as I read. You really made me so happy reading this tonight. I am rejoicing through the magic of your poetic and loving poem of an eternal flame that cannot be extinguished.

John

Well done and beautiful work

This is an interesting conversation between the two (father and daughter). the opening about how the body reacts even though it is deceased is and interesting opening.

“Heat that stays when the rest goes cold,” that is a good line. it can be used in a way to mean so many things. Very thought provoking