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Read MoreI failed her test.We were two equationsfrom the startwe just didn't add up. If my brain is travelingat 80 miles per hourand hers at 50,how long will it taketo determineour possible chemistry? She studied me,but couldn't findthe answer. Now I'm back,trying to...
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Force of attraction formula in physics.
F = G * (m1 * m2) / r².Force of attraction formula in humans
L= G * (m1 * m2) / r².Where L is Love
G is Gentleman
M1 is number of times he messed up
M2 is number of times she messed up
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing wordplay, love the whole equation vibe. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tim I absolutely loved this. This is a brilliant use of the math metaphor for relationships with women. Truly an enjoyable and amazing read for me tonight.
John
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Damn. This is next level. Mixing poetry AND math. Brilliant!!!
Much respect
Naaj
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This is gentle and clever the way you turn numbers into feeling it lands with a quiet ache. I always can expect something fresh every time I go to the back of the book if you will…
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Read MoreBlack wings that flutter through stormy sunshine. That storm within… with the sun glowing through black clouds that gathered over my eyes… Bright enough to penetrate into the dark of my soul… This storm and sun intertwined, ebony silhouette of the raven soaring through...
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This is magnificent.
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Thank you, Alexandria.
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You’re welcome. I love your work.
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Phenomenal write, Daniel. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThis sacred inner realm I keep within… Deep within. Hidden it is to the world’s judgmental, blind eyes! Every beat of my heart is rhythmic, dark beauty. My gothic heart beats on as if it possesses the pen itself! Every pulse from this rich...
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing imagery and an excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreYou keep teaching me new words.Spell the alphabet just for me.We've been together for a while now. But it feels like you don't know me.Alphabet boy,you spell the A's.Every little thing he says. He thinks that apples are good apologies.Well,it's not.I...
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I love the math component in this. Some things don’t always add up but we must figure out the equation:))