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Daniel Long wrote a new post

• 10 months ago

A Mother’s Hug Goodnight

Poetry, Uncategorized

September 5, 2025

1

Frigid, calm front hides in northern winds, the vast sky of my bedroom dims. Stream in winter Iced over, mother’s embrace letting go at bedtime. Still raining, sky’s dark pillow, eyelids become anchors, smothering. The cold front blanketing these damp lids, peacefully covers the coming storm.

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- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Daniel. A heartfelt tender write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Tim wrote a new post

• 10 months ago

THE SADIE PROBLEM

Poetry

September 5, 2025

11

This is in reference to the poem I made called Sadie Winters is not real. (Now deleted)It's based on an episode by Rick Beato (youtube) in which he created an AI character named Sadie Winters who is a fictional...

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- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  10 months ago
  
  If you follow Rick Beato you must be a music enthusiast.
  I have seen Rick discussing the impact of AI in the music industry and even he has said it’s getting harder to identy human from digitally created music.
  The same can be said for any ‘writing’ site….who is doing the writing.
  I for one, would never post an AI produced piece without declaring it.
  Sometimes, I’ll write a piece, get AI to tidy it up and then post both versions and let others decide which is better.Usually, it’s the AI free version .
  Its a crazy old world.🌞
  - Tim
    10 months ago
    
    Yes it is, Peter. I’m a drummer of 52 years. Thanks for the comment.
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months ago
  
  Hell yeah, Beato, has a great show. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Tim
    10 months ago
    
    Thanks very much, Damian. I watch him all the time.
- Neville
  10 months ago
  
  There a few things in life I detest more than AI .. and I can only think of four members of my own species that fall into that category .. All of whom are supposedly world leaders and one of which has no intelligence whatsoever, let alone artificial .. 😎👍I found this to be a compelling read which could prove write for further debate .. Neville
  - Tim
    10 months ago
    
    Thanks for the comment, Neville. It’s good to see you here.
    - Neville
      9 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      Likewise good sir 😎👍
- Green
  10 months ago
  
  I fear this is going to be a case of “the internet is forever”. Once it’s been used to train an AI, which somehow it seems like it already has, I don’t think deleting it will remove it from its “memory”. We’re entering a brave new world of technology and I’m quickly starting to feel very unprepared for it.
  - Tim
    9 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    I can relate to your feelings, Green. Thanks for the comment.
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Powerful and poignant
  - Tim
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you for the read and comment, Thomas. 🙂
Ghosteen wrote a new post

• 10 months ago

Shorts from Library of Unwritten Love Letters

Poetry

September 5, 2025

2

Adventures in the Skin Trade Baggage kneels heavy on our hearts late night Hotel porter lays two suitcases underneath a broken neon sign. It crackles ‘For Lost Lovers Only’ Crush my burning lips as ashes coil bed sheets into sailing knots, let's shelter in our skin...

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2 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  10 months ago
  
  Oh, I remember Tiffany lol. I like the collection here.
  - Ghosteen
    10 months ago
    
    Thank you Fia. I believe Tiffany is still performing!
Liziantus-Marantus wrote a new post

• 10 months ago

His Gaze

Biographies & Memoirs, Poetry

September 5, 2025

0

Sometimes I look into his gaze and wonder.Could his true eyes be blue or green?Brown,or a color evergreen? His gaze is a whole another world.A whole,different dimension.Where everyone ascends. And there is no sadness or expense.There everything is free and everyone...

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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 10 months ago

Wicked Woman

Poetry

September 4, 2025

16

somethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...

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16 Comments
- Neville
  10 months ago
  
  That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Alexandria
  10 months ago
  
  I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  10 months ago
  
  I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  10 months ago
  
  I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  10 months ago
  
  This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s the theory.. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months, 4 weeks ago
  
  Powerful work.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Styxian
  9 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
  It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
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