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Read Morenight wandered alone, dark feet encased in silent comfort dreams a decor - silver starred, lined with whispered perfectioneyes gazing, appraising - meandering future thoughtsdared - in an unholy language via its blushing thesauruspages blurred with dubious regard yet...
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Thank you so very much; you found what I’d tried to say: yes, silence into warmth
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This is such a deeply moving piece. You take us there & there is a breathtaking place. I’m a sucker for dew-laden grass in the mornings.
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Many thank yous, Willow. You have found what I tried to say without over-stating. Is said that feet soaked in dew remain innocent for life!
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I could see this printed within a book. It’s just the right amount of personal note along with staying on a creative writing avenue. It’s mature (educated) yet intoxicating.
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I could go overboard with thanks, Styxian! I try very hard to get to the core of writing the use of my own words! I was initially a short story writer but now destined to try my hand at poetry. Not easy! Take care.
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Phenomenally penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously my friend my writing isn’t everyones cup of tea but you make me feel cared for thank you ❤️
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Read MoreWith too much painful eye strain and too much social mediaI'm taking a break from both to touch grass, as they say.I apologize for any reviews I'm missing. See you when I return. 🙂
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Enjoy the grass;))
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Thanks Fia.
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Don’t forget to smell the flowers!!
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I’ll try not to. 😉
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Ground yourself, let nature speak to you and come back with a free mind and lots of inspirations!
All the best, Tim, hope to see you soon! 🌳-
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Thank you, Elke. 🙂
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Have a good break Tim. Come back refreshed.
Chris
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Thanks Chris.
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Take care, Tim. Recharge the batteries my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate the comment, Damian.
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Read Moreinside I crash into your energysmashing, cunted brillianceshining danger I can't resistinfidelity of the soulmy honesty is invaded by your darknessit seeps into my sorrowyour marred imageit makes me flinch what you call goodmiserable truth I hate the feelingof...
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Love the depth and layers in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian forgive my late response I find myself slipping of as of late ❤️
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Such a rich and layered piece. I love how it drifts like a dream, full of texture and sensation. The imagery feels both mysterious and intimate, especially in the way it moves from silence into warmth.