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Read Morei picked herlike a novelthe cover waseye catchingexquisitei would startto read her in depthbut not finishso i'd start again laterthen againthen againwe marriedand i discoveredi should have finishedor at leastread the plotor table of contentsi had no ideawhat i...
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Lol you ain’t lyin, Fia. :)))) Thanks.
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Book covers are meant to draw you in even if the book itself is rubbish.
I used to plough through books even if they were rubbish….not now.I give them about two chapters.If they haven’t got me by then,it’s arrivederci.
Our partners should be treated the same….lol-
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Thanks for the comment, Peter. 🙂
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I have three books I would like to return. Is that possible.
I must have missed something in those synopses.
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That’s a lot of money spent, J. 🙂 They must have been horror books. lol thanks.
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Reading has its dangers lol. Can’t help feeling this poem is going to be relatable to many. Made me smile you did Tim.
Chris
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lol Thanks for the comment, Chris. :))
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Clever, funny, and painfully relatable – This is the kind of truth you laugh at because it hurts a little. haha
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I appreciate the comment, RomaJ. Thanks. :))
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So you didn’t read any articles, you just looked at the pictures…LOL
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lol yeah pretty much. 🙂 Thanks for the comment, Styx.
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian. 🙂
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So true! A 20 yr old boy at my local market goes on and on about the girl he is going to marry. They met on the Internet a few months ago and met up in person twice. You can’t suggest he slow down. So often, we think we know it all. I was going to be happy when I escaped my .
mother’s home. First hubby was as violent and crazy as her.-
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I really appreciate your comment, Paula. I assumed you didn’t like anything I wrote. 🙂
Yes, some guys are too lost in the fantasy world to see what’s really there. Life will splash some cold water in their face when it’s too late.Sorry about your hubby and mom. I know it’s hard to get over that or forget. My mother was an alcoholic. I’ve had some horror in my life to.
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I love this. I never read in depth the outline of the or their stories either. A great metaphor you gave loved it 😍
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Thanks so much, Julie. Much appreciated. 🙂
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thank you, Thomas. 🙂
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Read MoreEyes tip-toeing over flotsam of sleeping habitat to the hills that follow This is closest we ever get to foreplay nests her head on my shoulder I imagine we’re lost in the country no land, no landmark only black and solid hills as compass like walking through...
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Love the feel of this. Reminds me of this song by S&G…..https://video.search.yahoo.com/search/video?fr=mcafee&p=poem+on+the+underground+simon+and+garfunkel&type=E210US752G0#id=2&vid=6df47f303922526d0faa70e1eaeed172&action=click
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Thank you J. Flattered. Song is universal.
Work this out. I’m Welsh first, British second and my beautiful Dad was English. We’re a complicated bunch across the Atlantic. I stand against the heinous Empire and her jingoistic bs. Other than that, I’m very easy going. Lol. This song / anthem is central to my poetic heart. Subtitles are provided!
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Thank you for sharing your song.
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This poem is beautifully vivid and cinematic. I love how you blend the quiet of the night, the train platform, and motion with personal reflection. The imagery of film and landscape creates a strong, lingering atmosphere – really well done.
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Thank you – or ‘Diolch’ as some say in my homeland. I’m just a metaphor whore really, who finds catharsis on the release of life onto keyboard.
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you are a very passionate lover I can tell I’m telling you ths as I blush I know I’ve known you for years ❤️
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Read MoreIt does not begin, it does not end. Never hear it start, never hear it stop. Ceaseless, present at every moment. This inner sound - an object of sense. With willpower we dominate, breathing at our will. Whereas we are subordinate to the sound of silence. An entity you cannot dominate, but...
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Hahah You needed Cliff Notes to read the book. This is good.;))