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Read More“I’m dead inside,” you say. Like a graveyard at midnight. No mourners here to trod untrodden paths by your headstone. Soulless and moonlit, an empty body, a starless night sky. Heretic prayers, unheard, fall on silent winds. I call your name, wordless in my incantation. I yearn to feel you breathe inside me. Take this lifeless carcass and...
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Read MoreThere is a glow within this storm.A dying eye of light so obvious,it lures me to come to it.As light is soundless,it is a silent beacon fire.I will cleave through this fog with faith!So, within the absence of sound,I...
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Read MoreThey say time is grace.Others say she is a disgrace.Her hair grows long with time. And when a new opportunity comes,she trims it.And life moves on.They say she is cold and cruel. For she doesn't give us endless minutes.Never endless moments.Untill...
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Read Moremy solemn mood had nothing to do with youit was my inner girl singing the bluesa melody of sadnessstrung together with notes of painsubtle hints of what was troubling mewithout revealing itselfa twinge of guilta little hurtindiscrimanate feelings that...
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Well done, Brenda. I like this.
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio I didn’t write anything yesterday so I thought I would today I’m glad you liked it ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, I know what it’s like to sing the blues. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you for feeling me on this ❤️
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Chère C.,
Breath everyday – write everyday.
But then, i don’t have this nice artwork.
With the whole picture you draw me in.Keep on keeping on, said Curtis.
Warm regards, Gus-
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hello dearest Gus good morning I try to write everyday not everyday is great thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Powerful work. Excellent.
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good morning dearest Thomas hello thank you for showing me love on this ❤️
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You’ve strung together the notes of pain very well. Perhaps singing the blues can be just as cathartic as writing about them. We can only hope.
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thank you graciously lovely Kelly ❤️
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Those solem moods are tricky. We can’t always keep them locked down. And then others feel the dark coolness of their touch. Beautifully written, Brenda 🧡
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good evening beautiful Willow yes they are and they come from nowhere somtimes… thank you for the love here ❤️I wrote a poem called Nostalgia about you and other poets…
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Read MoreIn the sea of blue-green glass The cracks and slivers are camouflaged Beauty entices and invites you to touch Unaware minute cuts into unsuspecting skin When eyes focus You see the warped and corrupted shards Lessons learned and ingrained into the subconscious As blood drips and...
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I see this as someone discovering the blue green glass for the first time. Interesting poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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I see it as a discovering of the truth about someone close.
It’s a great write however I interpret it.🙏-
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Thank you, Peter;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I love your musings. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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good morning lovely Fia this went from beautiful to dark carried out by the frothing sea so poignant ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin 🩷
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Beauty brought fore by abrasion.
An important truth of nature I believe.-
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Yes it is. Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
Pollution in its mildest form.
An environmental poem in disguise.
See? That’s the fun of it. To write something small and everyone had his/her own ideas about it.
Pure genius, no matter how you look at it.Keep ‘em coming please…..
Warmest regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus (I will try to keep going:) )
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Excellent analogy…beauty often disguises danger for the unwary
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Thank you, Willow;))
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Very mysterious and philosophical.
Regards JamesI love the way glass goes from sharp and dangerous to soft and smooth with the passing tides
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Thank you, James;))
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This is a good prompt. I enjoyed this.