you make me smile dearest Keith great write 💕

Intensely penned, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

Superb.

Appreciate that Duende. xo

Got to make it happen haha. I always enjoy a dark read.

Take an extravagant theme, add a big pinch of dark humour, a hint of weirdness, and use extraordinary writing skills and make a short, precise poem out of the ingredients – perfectly done, Keith ! xoxo

wowee dearest Keith great write 💕

Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hello Duende. So glad to see you here. Thanks. xo

Way to go there with the darkness. I actually think a piece like this isn’t meant to be thought about too much. Some things are what they are.

Great ink

Brilliantly penned, Keith. Into the book it belongs! Flawless victory.. lol. I had to say it. Incredible write my friend. Plastic people are the worst. Appreciate you.

Damian

Love this piece. I’ve met a few people like this. Where it’s like there’s nothing in that head haha.

Wonderful ink

We’re all marching to the grave. Great piece my friend.

The seventeen-year-old you were going through it. This is really good to be penned at 17

Superb work. Powerful.

Shades of the future Damian DeadLove. 🔥

Pretty deep thought for a 17yo to be considering the inevitability of death. Seems the art of poetry & philosophy started young for you. In my experience the general emo trends of the 90’s facilitated my poetic curiosity. It’s fun to read my own teenage writes but I’ve not been brave enough to share from that far back even with editing. 😝 ha! I didn’t have your level of skill at 17, though. Kudos!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you dig the lyrics my friend. I just realized today that I was better than I gave myself credit for, I’m my own worst critic. lol. I think all writers are that way though, we hold ourselves to our own high standards. My biggest problem was I never took time to appreciate what I was doing, that’s something maturity brings for sure. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

Damian

From our first breath until the last, we’re marching to the grave. But what we do in the interim…ah, that’s where it gets interesting. I did a quick math check & it tells me that I am only 5 years older than you. I remember these feelings at that age. A friend once told me “Girl, you do morbid so well!” Even at 17 you had vision & rhythm. And the evolution was so worth the journey to who you are, my friend

OMG, Dixon Butts. I’m sure there will be more names like that in future works.
I sometimes want to look away when I read your poems, but the laughs keep me there.

Damn! I forgot about the 9th.
Next time, remind me earlier. 😀

Cleverly penned, Keith. Hallmark could file litigation my friend. lol. Are you still pissed they didn’t give you a job? lol. This was crude but funny. Appreciate you.

Damian

He missed the shot?? How do you miss the shot? lol this is so funny. Nice one

Haha very romantic.

Great ink