I guess we all have our interpretations. I see a line of young people heading into a club or hanging out outside it to hear hip hop or rap. Many may disagree, but I see that kind of music as negative and detrimental. Just my two cents.

Tremendous flow here, my friend.

hello dearest Damian either they don’t read the situations or they are goading up to reveal what we know… through manipulation of a situation…they get me all the time this is one of your best in my opinion 💕

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved those lines as well, you’re right there is no such thing as a safe place in the world’s current state. Happy to read your commentary again, hope your music projects are going well. Appreciate you.

Damian

“While destruction lies around the bend”

It’s interesting how the word lies changes the entire tone when read as one definition over the other. This is such a cleverly written piece. And powerful, as you excel at, my friend

Fanfuckingtastic Damian. Powerful and packs a tremendous punch!

I kinda get an image of friends drifting apart maybe due to political differences.

Great ink, friend

hello dearest James a very beautifully succint poem I think we are on similar wavelengths today 💕

This felt so calm and balanced without having to use a lot of words to explain everything.

Nice work as usual🙏

I feel the sun and the moon with this. Very nice

Thanks for reading.
The sun and moon are always with us.
Regards James

How can there be one without the other? The unity in diversity is incredible. Beautifully written…

Superb work, my friend.

Oh this definitely needs to go on the song consideration lost! Everything about feels powerfully lyrical. The way your mind moves is fascinating. I can’t wait to hear the album, my friend

Nice to read you again, my friend. Your writing is almost always musical in my mind…
❤k

This was fire, friend. I always tell myself that doubt is the devil. Whenever I feel like I’m in over my head or failing.

Take it to the stars, my friend! And put me on the mailing list for fan club updates. You know im here for it. Your presence will be missed but life calls!

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. As always your support means a lot to my friend. If it wasn’t for you pushing me to do, Backstage, I’m not sure I’m making this album. I even ordered a studio mic stand, so I can stand up and sing. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

That is amazing news.💓 cannot wait to hear your album. Damian

YES!!!! Do it! I can’t wait to hear it.
And if you ever need female backup vocals… pick me! pick me! LOL

Seriously, let me know where I can find your stuff to listen to, when it arrives…
I’ve also just uploaded my first EP to Distrokid today – just 4 song collaborations from the past few years that I probably already shared on DUP – but putting it out into the bigger streaming world is a step that I just had to take in order to pave the road for future songwriting. I’m so excited to hear that you’re making the leap too! Wishing you much joy in the making.
❤k

Brilliant. Can’t wait.

“Heaven’s the same and where her ribs punch through the silicone drains”

Powerfully penned, Keith. The line above, that’s a fucking line my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful. Sharp and vivid.

Thanks HJ. You rock!