Thank you so much, Adira, for your appreciation of my poetry tonight. Really means the world to me.

John

Poetic genius. Your words flow so graciously. WOW!

I like the ending of this. How he returned the trees to them. This is nice story poem

Angels, thank you so much. I truly appreciate your liking the ending of my poem story. Means so much to me.

John

Adira, deep gratitude. So glad you found me here and look forward to reading more of the poets like you here. Your words on my poem mean a lot to me. Much appreciation.

John

I thought this was very imaginative. I could see every detail, when homegirl ran to tell her parents that she felt love for the first time. And that who thought or who to thunk it ☺️
It all started over a nut, as you put it❤️ John my brother, you’re such a good writer ✍️ thank you, I needed this.
Love your sister
Jackie xo

Deep gratitude Jackie my friend. I am most happy that you enjoyed my tale on the discovery of coffee. According to Ethiopian legend it was Khaldi the goatherder who discovered the magic bean for the brew. So here I imagined what if he got the credit but it was really a young girl who discovered it. So I mused on this idea. Very glad you enjoyed my friend. Thank you from my heart.

John xo

This is an interesting first chapter.

Wait until you read the rest then you can judge

Lord have mercy, Keith. Get out the Clorox and shovel. You still have time to bury her in the back yard.
Curious day for a murder – April Fool’s.
Seems like I read this on DUP.
Pop her head in the fridge. Dahmer up.

Oh, check your spelling on some things. I think you mean ‘conscience’ instead of ‘conscious’ a few places. Also, check the word “to” in several locations – some of these should be “too”

Thanks Dampkitten. Have no time for spelling. You can be my personal editor if you like.
Yes, this was from last year. I wanted to reissue this story on starsrite. Thanks for acknowledging it!