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Thank you kindly for your comments John, I’m glad you felt this way while reading it.
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Passionately penned, Jade. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m happy you appreciated it Damian! ⚘️
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A piece of poetry that is beautifully constructed & wonderfully expressed. Nice work.
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Thank you Visions, I appreciate your comments ⚘️
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This is a very sensual and steam piece of work, Jade.
Intense and exceptional. Very nice!!-
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Thank you Naajir! I tend to feel deeply..
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Read MoreI am always as dark as my inkborn in a most distant ageas alluring as I am sageliving my life on death's brinkUsing this wicked smilejust to get what I wantable to tease then tauntwith a most lethal beguileFor...
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Posted the wrong poem… ooops
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Oh my friend, you are the Goddess of this genre. I love the subtle flavor of this as I read and could see it all vividly in my mind’s eye. Like a vision of beauty and passion in which you leave your mark on him. That indelible sign of a night he will remember and be marked by forever.
John
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Beautifully penned, LDF. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreYou know, back in the day I love me some young men I was willowy, I was spring, Damn I was May I was down to trying every position conceivable Hormones were rampant The body and spirit were ready, willing, and able As work starts...
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Love the sheer erotic narrative here that draws me in and makes me want to stay until the very end. Truly a hot poem that inspired bedroom thoughts and feelings. I could feel this deep down where the sun doesn’t shine.
John
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Thank you, John. As long as you feel it deep down, then I did it right. lol
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Passionately penned, Fia. You always make the temperature hotter with your writes my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian I try to raise the heat when I can. ;))
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” They start with that whisper that hits behind the ear
A practiced tone
That causes goose bumps and raises those baby hairs ”
Yeahhh…this paints a pic of some nice memories.
Nicely written
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj😊
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I’ve always been accused of being a grown man… now you know why… this was a great story.. perfectly done…love it.
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Thank you, Sam., You do the whisper thing? Nice;))
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Read MoreHave you ever made love to a poet?I am creative in more ways than one.I can find poetry in the locks of your hair,and recite them in your ear as you come undone.I taste the words on your lips...
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Passionate rough writing. Well done.
Breathless. ❤️-
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Poemstar, I thank you for reading!! Always a pleasure.
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Passionately penned, P.G. Seductively beautiful this write is my friend. Clever wordplay as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, I thank you for reading and for always enjoying my word play. Appreciate you always, my friend.
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Like a sensual song of love and passion that I feel afloat in as I read and love where the river of your words took me. Love the feeling I got from this. Like an erotic romance of singular beauty and artistry.
John
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John, thank you sincerely. I am glad you enjoyed the ride. 🙂
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What do poets taste like?
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Like mischief and sin. How’s that sound?
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Sounds like me…💋
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Sensational xx
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I love this P.S. Well worded and seductively sinful. My type of write. Great work. You always amaze. xo
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Thank you Keith, still aiming to please.
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~P.G💋
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Superb work. You nailed it.
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Mr. Case, I am honored!
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~P.G💋
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LOVE this Title
Sorry
IM STEALING THIS ONE
MY VERSIÓN COMING SOON ???
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Thank you. Hopefully I am worthy of a mention.. lol go for it though!
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~P.G💋
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Poetically steamy and hot! Well done!
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M.E, thank you my dear friend.
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Read More⸻We didn’t need a manual.We had parents who were there—not hovering, not micromanaging,just there.And that was enough.So we learned to handle life.Alone. Early.And just fine.We were told what to doand when to do it.No debates, no feelings circles.No “gentle...
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What a ride. This is fantastic. I was one of those latchkey kids as well. We did it and made it work. Ingenuity & creativity. It made us for what we are today. We weren’t kids sitting in the corner crying about spilled milk or some lame ass shit they cry over today. Nice work here.
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Hi there Vision, I don’t know, I’ve been on this whole spinnaker of how life used to be. I think it’s the fact that the past 30 + years, life in America has just been decimated and eliminated; everything America was, is truly gone. And I’m feeling the burn. It’s not like generations before, where things would change and that was the way life goes, but it hasn’t just changed, It’s just gone.
Thank you for visiting. I always appreciate your presence on my page❤️
Jackie
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I don’t agree with everything but that’s okay. Your work makes you think. It’s a topic that is right at the front of the world but everyone is ignoring it. I like how you just tackled the issue in the room.
You might enjoy Ray Bradbury’s short Story “The Veld” it echoes what you are highlighting here.
Keep up the intensity my friend
I really enjoyed thisJames
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Nice to see you James. I appreciate you coming by to read me. It’s just a crazy world we live in. That’s all. And I will check out Ray Bradbury Veld.
Thank you my friend
Jackie
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Jade this is a bonfire of passionate poetry. You have created a love poem of depth and beauty that swept me away as I read.
John