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Read MoreOh, come to me my love in the bluest of the night sky The stars are in jubilation of our union The depth and swells of the ocean Rise in approval Oh, come and not fear The strength of the lightening as our hands touch The...
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Thank you. Damian :))
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This kinda rocks in a deliciously love poem kinda way .. fingers crossed for the future .. Neville
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I will keep them crossed for those who are about to venture down that path. Thank you Neville.
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Dope!! ’nuff said!!
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you Naaj;))
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Chère F.,
A subtle prayer
A declaration of love
Is all that I am
Thinking of….You are a class of/on your own (what do I know of your language?)
And this question answer format is a beautiful find.
Needless to say I love it to bits.
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you so much Duhsjaak
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This reminds me of classic poetry from the early 1900’s. It has that feel and language. Nice one,, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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This is such a sigh-worthy piece. I think most of us embark on that journey with these hopes. For some, it lasts. For others…not so much. I love the fierce optimism in this one
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Thank you Willow. That means a lot;)
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Fia, this is a jubilant celebration of love that you paint with lyrical wonder. I enjoyed this so much my heart sang as I read. You really made me so happy reading this tonight. I am rejoicing through the magic of your poetic and loving poem of an eternal flame that cannot be extinguished.
John
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Thank you John;) That put a smile on my face;)
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Well done and beautiful work
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Thank you, Lizz;))
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The corner is always dimmed
as if he left the shadow behind.Yes, same old song. Nice poem
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Yes Fia same old song. Take care.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Keen observation my friend. Loneliness is the main character in a lot of songs. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Nice to hear from you Damian. Have a good day today.
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Benjamin Scraps posted in the group Music is Art
when that doctor asked me “son, how’d ya get in this condition?”
I said “hey sawbones, I’m just carryin’ on an old family tradition”![Profile Photo]()
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Read More~roar~ it always begins: again,rusty tongs clutching a wet worm suctioned from the womb through the dustof an earthly tomb by red hands into blue crownslearning to hide from the haunter of the dark a divine spark ceding shrilly echoes maintaining stern remembrance of misplaced lessons and an unforgiven foolishness puncturing...
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The way you structured the poem it looks calm then increases with intensity just to calm down again. There is so many twists and turns in one life that it is impossible to get the nuance of it. Between the government and the churches and the societal acceptance of things that should not be accepted. Very interesting write
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This one hits like a freight train of memory, madness, and raw observation—gritty, sprawling, alive with every sense screaming at once.
I love how it doesn’t just tell a story; it drags you through the chaos of life, pain, and revelation, leaving you dazzled and unsettled in the best possible way.
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Read MoreAnother spirt in a quagmire Selling off dignity just to get by Inflated egos that conspire Adding layers to a perpetual lie Sycophants always fall in line Empty vessels lacking a spine This world so full of sorrow Throwing obstacles in the way All I’m asking of...
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It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I agree.
Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think I’ve seen subterfuge used in poetry before and you made it fit and feel perfect.
I think many of us are feeling the same way, especially with the way the world is going.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like using odd words or hardly used words from time to time. When I can make them fit of course. lol. The world is very fragile at the moment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautifully penned, Fia. This had such an uplifting vibe my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian