An emotional write! Well written my friend!
Though Marrakesh would be so hot to sunbathe in! “)

NOPE
You’re mine, Sam. Shackles, Collar, and Leash. The whole damn package. Do you seriously think I’m letting you out of this dungeon? Get on your knees and open up. I’ve got your Sunshine Rain right here for ya like orange juice for breakfast and a whole world of wonder for you to taste and worship. Just another day in paradise, baby. You know you love it.

What is love but madness wrapped in chocolate?
A trap for the sweettoothed fool who presumes that it’s permanent.
Go on your trips Sam, leave love behind.
Take only your words and the truth….ageing,sickness,death.

Beautifully penned, Sam. A great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Funny how DK said you are locked in her dungeon when the both of you are in mine. This is a beautiful piece Sam. Midnight sun..very nice.

Wonderful work. Superb.

Powerfully penned, PAR. Like the depth of this write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

For me this started out soft then built up to an emotional break down. Really good Par

Damn Televisions.
There’s this pale girl with long black stringy hair that keeps crawling out a well and through my screen.

Actually, I love this mystery of this. Very Stephen King. Nocturnally disturbing.

Thank you.

Great job with the rhyming in this… engaging… carried me along…

Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Tight rhymes, incredible wordplay, great phrasing, nicely done. Also dig the music. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is so good. I can hear this as an opening to a show.

Love this couplet
“Sanity was the place you thought you craved.
Serenity was a fable purposely misplaced.”

You have some great lines in this piece.