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Thomas W. Case and
Sam Dickens are now friends
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreBlood drips slow from the ceilingOh it tastes like rustHead's poundingSirens screamingMy mind’s combustCops poundingThe door’s caving in“Where were you” they shout“where’ve you been”I’m blankI’m hollowThe reel won’t playNo pastNo shadowJust a foggy grayIron tastes like memoryBitter and coldQuestions...
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Thank you Willow 🙏🏻
Your words truly mean a lot to me.
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Phenomenal lyrics my friend especially that chorus, love the drive of the musical arrangement, the beat is almost trance like. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian! 🙏🏻
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This is awesome! I’m sorry I’m late to this post!!
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Thank you so much Adelphina! It really means a lot to me.
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I can’t thank you enough for your beautiful words. I am pretty bad at accepting compliments so bare with me.
Also, english is not my native language so if I say something that doesn’t make much sense, I apologize!But thank you for saying all this to me. Truly.
And no, I do not realize I help people through my words but it is really nice to think I can/do.❤️
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Read MoreBeneath Her Pretty Dress Now isn’t that truly something else something wonderful no less .. While no longer taught and flat but lightly bowed and more convex perhaps .. I hereby do confess I am already very much in love with what has just begun to show .. But for...
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It is nice to read that a man still appreciates a woman’s maturing body
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Bless you Fia .. I know I surely do and always shall but the one in question has a baby growing inside her .. Neville
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One of my favorite places is beneath a pretty woman’s dress. 🙂
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Thanks for taking a peek Tim 😎👍
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I am certain that every man is completely agreeing with You here, what a playful Neville!
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Bless You dear Light💕.. this little scribble was conceived within moments of my being told the young lady in question was going to have a baby .. it’s an old poem now .. a bit like me 😎⭐💛🌻👍
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Wow! It’s about “baby” and giving life, You sure have the way with words lol. I deeply appreciate this poem in a different way now! Bless You 💕 Forever Young Neville 😎
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Bless You dear friend 💛⭐🌻😎👍
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A mature was to admire a woman!
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Thanks a minion Dan .. 😎👍
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I snickered and thought unclean thoughts like a school boy when first read, completely missing the lady’s age, sidelined, as I was, by the niceties behind that dress. Now aware that she might not be young and that I’m no longer 12, my motor is still revving. Summer dresses are just so fine!
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Hi Sam, so good to see you my friend .. Oh’ n thanks for the thumbs up .. Neville 😎👍
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Really beautiful piece, showing lovely appreciation for another. I enjoyed this.
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Many thanks for stopping by and checking out my little scribble .. so very much appreciated .. Neville
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The passion and play of this is an utter delight. I love wearing dresses. They’re a one and done, no fuss picking something to match. It’s the feel of them I think most women prefer. The feminine quality that stirs a man’s imagination…so well captured here.
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I’ll take it, that’ll do nicely .. Very nicely indeed .. Cheers & Many thanks Kelly .. Neville 🍷
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What depravity does the rip tide take you to..
This is a good write which understands the power of lust.
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously ❤️have a great night…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian it’s so good to see you I thought we lost you thank you graciously❤️
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Lust is a beast! You wove this one with a silken hand, Brenda. That ending was about dead on perfect 🧡
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hrllo beartiful Willow thank you graciously❤️
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Crimsin, this is fantastic! You weave this emotional tour de force into a poem of great seductiveness. You make an emotionally sensual poem of the highest order here. I could feel the rip tide through you words. And the ending couldn’t have been better. Truly a resolution to surpass them all. Loved this all the way.
John
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hello dearest John good evening I am blushing from your beautiful comment thank you graciously ❤️
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