Quality write
Says a lot within a short amount of words

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I agree with Gary. It is a bit different from the norm too. Your choices of wording are unique and powerful once it is all built into a poem like this.
High quality.

I love how the poem blends physicality and emotion, making each gesture feel tender and intense, with a haunting, lingering echo in the final lines.
A striking and intimate piece.

We are emotional creatures!
I might be guilty of this. 😁

Tremendous work, my friend.

Beautifully penned, Neville. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Ah, the contradictions of a lover’s heart. Love is indeed complicated, but, yes, it is so much fun to “hold on”. To actually feel the need and confusion within them, to love them. Really a nice poem, Neville.

-Curt

Lol I remember reading this. let’s agree that many times the only weapon we can have against You is “tears”😁. We women can be too complicated for you, I admit this, yet we both should accept each others natural differences to live happily after 😄💖✨😎 love this little scribble here, and please don’t get annoyed and forgive our playful nature 😉