Well, this makes me think of a fallen angel, caught in the dilemma of righteousness and vengence. By the grace of God, perhaps, yet there is an underlying energy here too. I like the whirlwind of thoughts going on here. I can sense your struggle through your words, quite easily. Well expressed Crimson.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Yes.

This is all a great read but I absolutely love the last line!
Great collaboration!

Amethyste is my birthstone, so I had to come and read something written by you. I am most definitely not disappointed!! You and Jim’s Music spoke to the desires of millions of people who want and need such a world. Count me as one of them. Your poem reminded me of John Lennon’s “Imagine”. Really cool collaborating.

Curt

I get the distinct feeling I’ve met some of these along the way too .. but fishing always sounds like a good plan to me even on a bad day .. Nice one Thomas .. Neville 😎👍

I can strongly identify with this Thomas.

hello dearest Thomas I too relate to nature more this is great ❤️

Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is an excellent write my friend. I can relate! Appreciate you.

Damian

The Dead, strange folk, very strange. They have this vacant smile, glassy eyes and have these “tracks” they want to give me. They are everywhere. I think we should be afraid, very afraid cause now they are in the seats of power and want more. I went fishing the other day, and the fish I caught, 28 inch trout, tried to hand me a tract. Isn’t it funny how what dead people want to “eat” is your brain. They’re everywhere I tell ya, everywhere.
er…. sorry Thomas, I kinda got carried away thinking about your poem and Dead people. But I have to admit, I was looking over my shoulder as I read.

A 5 snaps, and 2 hell yes, poem. Thanks Thomas!

Curt

Love this. To the point and I know what you mean. Well said.

I wonder what it is that makes them think they’re alive. I haven’t been fishing since I was 4, but I do love my tent time. Brilliant write

Thank you. You’re the best. I just put up a new video.

Yes, I feel these words.
Fishing and cooking your catch on an open fire is one of great pleasures in life.
Regards
James

Thanks

Poverty is trauma from which very few survive unscathed.The survival instinct is probably just slightly more powerful than its opposite … oblivion.

You’re amazing and you probably don’t even know it.

Take care Paula.🙏

Dang that’s deep and sad, be good lady