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Read MoreWith No Hint of An EndThese words may have no beginning,but they bounceand echo loud, around the labyrinthsof the self-same shell they were first each imprisoned in ..Fine words they are tooand when whispered soft, might bemistaken for the sea,or the wind,...
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Thanks tons Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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“These words may have no beginning”… they have no end either… Enchanting, captivating, breathtaking… passionate as only how passion should be. this is a masterpiece of poetry and love, though the reader smiles as they read, yet it pulls a tender tear from the heart, a tear of love. Mr. Ken would be joyous reading this. beyond gorgeous….
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Many thanks my very dearest of literary friends .. Please excuse my delayed response, I have been a bit busy of late and am still stumbling near blindly around this delightful website .. p.s. am glad you smile so favourably upon this little scribble and hope that Mr. Simm would similarly approve .. Kindest of regards & with wishes for all good things, Your friend, ME 🙂
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Beautiful work.
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Cheers are clearly in order Thomas .. So cheers, Neville 👍
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Beautifully penned, Neville. A very delicate write my friend. Excellent work.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you most kindly kind sir .. So muchly appreciated .. Neville 😎👍
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After reading the comments above, what could I possibly say? Hopefully, and it’s not just my wishful thinking it is the end part that is “real”. But that middle should be “real” as well. Damn Neville, your poem makes the reader (me) hope it is all “real” (and yes, even the fantasy parts!!) The sum of all these parts is: I loved reading your poem, Neville!!!!!!!!!
Curt
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You are so very kind Curt, bless you my friend .. Neville 😎👍
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Read MoreBefore Time was once apple skinned and quartered still hanging from the tree, as if a disembowelled astronaut hanging from moon gallows At the hill’s summit we knelt among the dead, ate the rancid gifts from their bodies flesh of berries, mouths and holes of skin, until the sky darkened...
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I always like it when someone starts with an object, “Apple,” and ends with the same object. This is good. I enjoyed it.
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Yeesh! I’m hoping Del skips this one! (we’re planning a ’27 wedding). lol.
Your poetic strength is maybe lost on some readers, because you go deep like this. There’s geometry in this creation, angles and dark corners. I can take the weight, though, when reading your powerful lines. Because there is reward in finding the meanings and how we perceive it all. Outstanding depth here. -
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As always Mark, I’m so pleased someone gets me.
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Read MoreHe knocked on my virtual windowKnock knockI just wanted to say helloA smile on my faceA light in my eyesUgh ugh ummmHello back dear friend.
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There was a series I liked with cyborgs that I got hooked on. this reminds me of it. Really good Amethyste
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Thank you Fia.
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Hello out there, in there. 🙂
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Hello back.
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Thank you dear.
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New encounters are exciting. But we can’t help to subconsciously be cautious.
This reminds me of that.
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This is so tender
Favorite part is how you ended it
“with not one hint
of a beginning, no signs of a
middle nor trace of an imminent end even”