Powerfully penned, Benjamin. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Benjamin I love your style I have chills❤️

This is a beautiful compilation of imagery in this form

To write a whole poem as haikus/senryus is outstanding! that’s a talent, I remember reading some poets composing few verses as haikus/senryus but not long as yours here, and most of your verses can stand alone as it is. I could feel here how nature is angry and speaking to now world where humans played with its rawness, the old genuine days against the new fake days, at the end the writer seemed to be fed up and welcoming the end if this end means the end of all madness, maybe then a new earth will be born.

A life well lived…

Much respect

Naaj

Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

a very heavy write no one should bear such a burden it’s too much to bear… my son drank himself to death we are left with a hole in our life knowing he chose death… hugs ❤️

I agree with crimsin this is very heavy. There sadness, grief and confusion left behind because of the suicide will never truly go away.

Excellent. truly.
The topic is always brutal in its finality. How it is written of is where we, as the living, try to reason with the utter chaos that it must be on them. I never, ever understand that quitter mentality. That sounds cruel, calling them quitters, but that is how I see it and deal with it. I have suicides in my family, and it pisses me off.
Many of us have had horrendous circumstances to deal with, but the act of surviving is what makes us supreme beings.
Hope is eternally gold. It makes us rich.
Your write is outstanding in its view, and the crafting of it. I really admire this.

Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. I like the way certain lines contradict one another. Nice touch. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Benny for the most part I cannot connect with people as they only offer the surface I hear this well written and deeply felt poem ❤️

Thanks folks

Ohh the passion in the write and the meaning touched me.