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Read MoreEyes so fixed, they glaciated in sight of the arctic reality! Icicles hanging from my eyelids before the wintry glow of the sun, which is nowhere near to thaw tearcicles. These frozen chimneys, when thawed, billow the black smoke of my breakdown! The alpenglow on the snow-capped summits of...
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Read MoreOld Sunlight Time, it did, for sure stand still there .. The mirrors well and truly cracked, with dead flowers laid upon the empty window sill there and tired old sunlight straining through torn net curtains while a single dust mote pirouettes then dies there .. The same old photographs with...
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Thanks a million brother T .. that’ll do far more than just nicely .. Cheers, Neville 😎👍
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Powerfully penned, Neville. Love the layers and depth of this write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cheers Damian .. Neville 😎👍
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This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.
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Thank you so much Fia! 🙏🏻
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This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?
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Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.
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Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian 🙏🏻
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FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!
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Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
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Read MoreSwimming through a sea of ice and glass... Trying so hard to let go of the past... Crimson swirls do glisten and shine... Oh the pain is so sublime... From my bleeding soul... Does a scarlette river flow... Let's me know I'm still alive... Tells me...
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Powerfully penned, SW. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow. I’m stunned. Brilliant work, my friend. On many levels.