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Read MoreI checked the clockIt was past midnightTwo hours had passed without me realising itAnd an hour weighs ten hours thesegrim daysA fleeting happy momentSomething you want to catchLike butteflies with blue armsWhen you are a childYou gave it to...
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Thank you Damian. Hugs and love.
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I love the way you write ❤️
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Thank you dear. Your comment made my day. 🙂
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Read MoreBitternessYour life in bitternessHatredHate consumes your every emotionYour soul is engulfed with blacknessPutting your guilt upon othersHate takes over your lifeHate takes over your mindYou feel your life slip awayWhen you live your life in hateYou seal your destinyYou've...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This was an excellent fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this piece Damian.
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Hate hollows the spirit until nothing remains but the echo of its own ruin.
Only love, when remembered, can unseal what the heart has already buried.-
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Your words always shine PAR. Thank you for this feedback.
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This reads like a moral reckoning set to a slow, steady drumbeat.
The contrast between hate and love is simple, direct, and effective.-
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Appreciate the feedback Thomas. Thank you!
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Read MoreAs odd as it may seemThis reality is only a dreamLike millions of insects freezing to deathSociopathic is my mathematicsThe final answer is zeroC'mon, you'd love to be the superhero The processed foods of your laborsHave decayed into diseaseAnd the...
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Ahh the processed food we consumed is decayed in desease…why was I eating when I read this. Good one. Good visuals
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Stay away from processed foods. They will debilitate you and eventually kill you! Thanks Fia!
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Read MoreIf you could disappear, I'd be a happy manWhat does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time Take a huge bite of my psychotic addictionCome a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchenConsequences...
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Oh man the enemy is within. Only you can break yourself down. Good spill
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Appreciate that Fia. Thank you!!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent exorcism my friend. Seriously, in this instance that’s what I’d call this amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some of my pieces I feel I’m possessed. When the writing session is over, I go back to my laid back, humble ways. Thanks man.
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Love it when you’re SO dark, Mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Hello HJ. I thank you for the generous comments here. The darkness comes out every so often. Happy that you enjoyed this.
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Read MoreA Dream I Had While Asleep, January 20th 2026 The air in my grandparents’ house tasted of woodsmoke and old memories, a stillness that usually feels like an ending. But then she was there. Marsha. Not as a memory, but...
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Powerfully penned, John. Excellent storytelling my friend, this one tugs at the heartstrings. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Deep gratitude my friend. This story, based on a dream about my late former wife, was the most emotional dream I have ever had about here. Very glad you enjoyed this, my friend. That means so much to me. Thank you so much.
John
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Beautiful piece John. Well written and marvelously executed.
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Gracias Visions. Very happy you enjoyed this dream story about the visitation from the beyond from my late wife. Thank you from my heart.
John
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This is a lovely story. Love this line
“a reminder that even in dreams, our love carries the weight of our fragility”-
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Thank you so much Fia. Glad you enjoyed this. This vignette was based entirely on a dream I had a couple of nights ago. Much appreciated.
John
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Dreams always have some kind of meaning behind them. Trying to figure that meaning out is the hard part. Perhaps the lost dress was a representation of words that were never spoken. Or desires never totally met. The ending is warm and affectionate. As a poet or writer, dreams can be of value, which in this case, was beneficial for a good story with a happy ending. 🙂
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Tim I love your insights here. Indeed you illuminate he hidden nature of meaning in dreams. Indeed, I do think the lost dress held a meaning. As did the atm machine. I could imagine the atm machine meaning that the love we had was never really about money but that she was looking for something more than what money can buy from me. Thank you so much for sharing your insightful thoughts here. They were greatly appreciated.
John
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend, always enjoy your observations. Appreciate you.
Damian