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    Demanding

    Style means nothing without substance  That’s something money can’t buy Walking through the world in a trance Long enough to embrace living this lie   Social outcast learns how to survive  Turning loneliness into independence  Wanting to avoid the impending nosedive Sometimes caution means ride the fence   Timid...

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    • When I read your musing, a quote of Friedrich Nietzsche was the first thought that came to my mind: “You must have chaos inside to give birth to a dancing star. “It’s exactly the chaos, the self doubts, the questions upon questions, the deep reflections at night which give birth to a dancing star of inspirations writings and deep thoughts. Great work, dear Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

    • This is a good piece of musing, Damian.
      This is so true
      “Timid people constantly read the room

      While they study the human psyche “

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Loved those lines as well. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • Amazing piece Damian. Thank you for sharing 🙏

    • I think it all comes from being wounded too many times. I identify with this very much.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you, that has a good deal to do with it. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Wonderfully written Damian. Well said. Keep up the great poetry my friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support my brother. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Dude, I’m not timid at all and yet I still read a room! I am extremely observant of my surroundings. It’s a crazy world yaknow!
      Your write is a crowd of personalities, interesting in each of their ways. The rhyme makes it flow really well. It’s carrying a beat all its own. Well versed Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is a crazy world, reading the room is always required. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • hello dearest Damian this is excellent I can relate to the searching and lonliness of not being satisfied with pat answers ❤️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know exactly what you mean. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • It takes so many approaches and responses to survive these days. And not the least of which is temporary retreat and regroup. How do your pieces always seem so relevant to every moment? Prophet, I’m telling you. Keep assembling the pieces of the puzzle, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. These days reading the room and critical thinking are required to survive it seems. I will always be piecing together the puzzle, it’s what I do. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • There’s a real honesty here in the way you weave survival, wisdom, and self‑doubt into one puzzle feels deeply human. The closing admission about chaos being “demanding” hit especially true.🙏🏻🕊️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, kesnerfreds. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite stanzas as well. Thank you for your continued support my friend, right back at ya. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Reminds me of the matrix with the red and blue pill. Either face reality or live in fantasy.

      Great ink friend.

    • Damian you formed this into a great poem of rumination. Very much loved the way this unfolded. So much wisdom in your words. Truly great poem my friend.

      John

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    How Do You Sleep At Night?

    Been peddling cruel dreams Kerosene lies forged in hate Nothing is ever as it seems When logic's robbed of weight   Still holding onto an illusion  Drifting further from reality Ain’t no calm in mass confusion  Useful idiots prefer brutality   Upside down heading off-road  This house of cards is...

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    • “useful idiots prefer brutality” killer fuckin line. excellent write.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, twofiftythree. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well, great minds think alike. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • So relatable… nicely done

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I want music for this one. Currently I’m working on a song called, “Novocain.” The words are posted here on the site. I got the music laid out, got the growls recorded, trying to get a good vocal take on the verses and bridge. Which requires me to sing. lol. Glad to see you back! Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Brilliantly written socially critical text, dear Damien! You will definitely make a killer song out of it!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • This is by far one of your best poems, Damian. Every stanza kicks ass. I like the Lennon reference and where you went with it. Great one!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I knew somebody would get the Lennon reference. It’s one of my favorites writes as well, I knew I had something once I penned the first verse. Sometimes a writer just knows.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Well this is strong! Like flexing on a page. It’s tight with its rhymes and meter, like a pro boxer hitting us with a thesaurus!
      (damn, that’s a clever description, huh! LOL)
      Powerful write, Damian. Golden gloves…

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really cool commentary brother, your continued support means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks, Mary. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Some people have no soul. The sad part is they thrive in their own filth. Great ink friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Dude, I totally agree. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Enjoyed this poem immensely. From the rhymes, to the flow to the powerful message. Outstanding job Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Hey brother, thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thoroughly enjoyed from end to end .. No kiddin, write on brother .. Neville 😎👍

    • This is strong as straight vodka on the morning after the Bolshevik revolution in Russia. Very strong my friend. Truly a power tonic in this age of authoritarianism in America. You hit the bullseye. You are a master at writing song lyrics that rock my soul.

      John

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. It is a sad state of affairs these days. Like witnessing a train wreck playing out and being strapped inside the lavatory of that locomotive. Thank you for your support my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • You know, there are times I wish you weren’t so nail on the head accurate. But these are dark days we’re entered into. Best to look them square in the eye. Brilliantly penned, my friend. Into the list it goes, as you say!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Gotta look them square in the eye, make them flinch first. Always enjoy your commentary my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Solace In Chicago

    I got lost in the depths of Chicago tonightSwaying to the horn sections sonic assault Catching the beat with a melody so bright  Hearing this rhythm burning hot as asphalt Smooth transition into another catchy hookA walking bass line marches with the...

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    • I grew up listening to them. They bring back many high school memories. Nice one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love the classic stuff myself. After Kath passed away, Cetera took control. His vision was more pop, and less horns. Like I said the band lost it’s soul without, Terry. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A beautiful tribute to Chicago and Terry Kath. I love how the poem captures the energy of their horns, bass, piano, and guitar. It perfectly conveys how their classic sound can bring both excitement and solace.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Terry Kath, was the heart of the band for sure. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • To find solace in the music. It is a comfort that I need. Nice writing cuz

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s something we all need in my opinion. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • There is something about classic rock that is so authentic.
      The way it sounds and the tempo. Love the stuff!
      Wonderful tribute write Damien.
      I especially loved the piano is simmering line!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love that line as well, gotta love the classics. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • A fine and much deserved tribute to one helluva guy .. Write and rock on my fine literary friend .. Neville 😎👍

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He was one of a kind for sure. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • There really wants another sound like theirs, was there? I’m permanently haunted by the music of the 80s and theirs always lands on my mental and emotional playlists. This is a beautiful tribute, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They had some decent songs in the 80’s. But Peter Cetera took control of the group once Terry died. He envisioned a more poppy sound with less horns. It just never had the soul of the classic 70’s sound. Terry Kath was their heart, and they were never the same without him. Just my opinion. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • See, I always learn something from you in these. I wasn’t allowed to listen to the radio until the 80s so I missed most of the ‘before’ era. I’ll have to go hunting…

    • Chicago is absolute badass. I never liked the pop-driven 80’s stuff, and I believe it skews the perception of this band for many. Live performances as powerful as any metal band. Solid tribute.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Benjamin. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree. Cetera’s vision of the band was a huge departure from Kath’s. The 70’s stuff had balls, it had heart and soul. Killer live band, Kath’s blazing solo on 25 or 6 to 4 comes to mind. You know your music. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I like it when you put us nearer an artist, or group, and we can perhaps learn a bit or just revel in the story too.
      You’re an interesting man, Mr Damian. Thank you for sharing some of your talent and history with us! I enjoy it all.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well thank you, that means a lot to me my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Having older sisters gave me access to all types of music from an early age. Can still recall hearing ‘If You Leave Me Now’ for first time. Your words are a poignant tribute.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ghosteen. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love all kinds of music. I started out a metal head, but I’ve evolved over time. lol. Good song. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Hello Damian. Excellent write as usual. Never was a fan of Chicago. My parents were huge into them during the 70’s. The one album I do appreciate and own is their debut from 69. Terry Kath destroys it on that release. His playing is right up there with Hendrix.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The first album was killer, Kath, was an amazing guitarist. Hendrix himself, told one of the horn players in the band, that Kath was better than him. According to legend that is. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Band like Chicago were so good and creative. We don’t get bands like that anymore. Great ink friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No we don’t it’s a shame. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I absolutely love the music of Chicago. They rock my world. And your poem is true to the city and the band. I felt the urban pulse of he music an city that was vibrant and totally had me in the world of that band and the city. As rhythmic as a song and colorful as the greatest jazz poems. Enjoyed this immensely.

      John

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Love them too, Terry Kath, was their heart and soul. Chicago after his death was a more pop/rock. Thank you for the excellent commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Wasn’t it Jimi Hendrix who said Terry Kath was THE best guitar player – EVER? Wow, what a sound this group had…what talent. I caught them in concert in my high school years, and was blown away by the “horn sections sonic assault”. I had a crush on James Pankow, but Terry was truly the heart and soul of this group. What an awesome tribute to one of music’s elite bands. Thank you for your inspiration, Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kelly. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve heard that Hendrix said that as well. So cool you got to see them live, that had to be an amazing show. Elite musicianship throughout that group. The man on the sly trombone, Mr. Pankow. Danny Seraphine was a beast on the drums. But, Terry was the man. He made the guitar talk and sing. He had a hell of a voice himself, very soulful. Thank you for the lovely commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Point Of View

    Ignorance is bliss amongst the arrogant  Always coloring outside the proper lines Seems every person has a different slant Beautiful flowers covered by thorny vines   Never assume in a world painted with lies It only complicates what seems to be real Dark clouds cluster along...

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    • I don’t like arrogant people, I’m sure most don’t. Trying to get along with them is almost impossible so I don’t try. And being in a band with one can be maddening. I don’t know, often times I wonder if they’re just wounded and like a dog they try to fight the world and everyone in it. It takes patience I guess, and a lot of it to get through and heal those wounds. Whatever. Good one, Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. In a band it’s usually toxic in my experience. I think they’re usually overcompensating for something, there is always an insecurity tucked deep inside their heart somewhere. I’m too old to play games anymore. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I consider myself a peaceful person for the most part and do want people to heal.
      I always wonder what the hell happened. Everyone is born innocent but living can change people.
      Experiences change people. Some grow from it and others don’t and fester.
      As I got older I also learn from observing and knowing when something is a lost cause.

      Enjoyed the read amigo!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Life is rough for sure, I often think all humans are broken a little bit, it’s kinda a product of time in this world. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • You truly succeed in unlocking new points of view with your brilliant and thought provoking writing, dear Damian! Many people become hard-hearted and bitter, when the storms of life challenge them. But it is never too late to reach their hearts. ‘Aren’t we all beautiful flowers covered by thorny vínes?’ in the end, love will win over arrogance, ignorance and violence!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed, we are all covered by thorny vines, often beauty does live inside. Thanks for such wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I always try to be conscious of the fact that I don’t know another person’s pain. But sometimes I really just want scruff the arrogant ones and tell them “Stop making your damage my trauma!” Wouldn’t do any good anyway. But the urge is there. That arrogance is usually armor. Crack the armor and it crumbles. Then we get to the heaet of the matter. The places you go with your musings, my friend…

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That sounds right to me, that they use arrogance as armor. It usually leads to a breakdown of sorts when that armor cracks. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • That first line really hits–‘Ignorance is bliss amongst the arrogant.’ It sets the tone for such a sharp reflection on how perspective shapes truth. I love how you balance disillusionment with hope–the idea that words and compassion can still open new ways of seeing

      Beautifully penned

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m always trying to find that proper balance between disillusionment and hope. Always enjoy your keen commentary my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Perfectly poemed my friend .. makes perfect sense and looks so good sitting on this particular page .. which was obviously made for it .. write on brother .. Neville 😎👍👍

    • Damian, this is strong tonic on arrogance. You put the iron to the fire with this without a dull moment in the. You concisely and powerfully express your views and emotions that spill across the page brilliantly.

      John

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