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Read MoreBalding age of wisdom and the world grows oldHair continues to fall out, the truth has been toldI'll continue to repeat myself, hopefully it makes you forgetRunning on empty is rewarding, but not cool if you're on a jet Cataracts,...
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Yes it does. Thanks Fia
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with clever wordplay my friend. Dig this brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you my friend. Always appreciated!
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Read MoreI’ll trace each sparkAlongThe shadowed bends,MeetingEvery flickerWhere the river flows. To drownIn that riverTasting secrets forbiddenIn a valley’s embraceThe flicker you litIs nowThe flame that grows Following your riverI driftTasting the flickerIn the valley’s foldWhere forbidden warmthTurns each pulseInto a quiet...
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Panting…Yeah, this hot. Like it;))
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Thank you. More to come. Hope you enjoy
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This appears to be a metaphor for a consuming lust. Something that draws in more and more heated passion the more it flows. Thrusting deeper. The last stanza sums it up nicely.
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, WRW. A very steamy write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreStarting a fireYou answerStirring a dangerYou craveLost in the heatOf a dancerOn a river of wordsYou save To linger againIn shadows returnedOn a currentNo power can holdDo we wander againWhere fire has burnedOn the ashesOf words so bold Following your sparkI...
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It’s great how the words flow so well. You can fill this building up to something.
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Beautifully penned, WRW. Another amazing write my friend. Great flow.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWords that lingerrise inside of mehoping to filla room of quiet firewith echoes only few can hear To drink themfrom a cup of dangerletting the tastewash over meI surrender Words that pullshiver through my skinreaching to toucha flame that waits in...
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This is interesting. You’re burning to have your words heard and you finally decide to toss caution in the wind and speak, even if you’re afraid, you hope someone will listen. At least that is what I get. Welcome to Stars Rite
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Powerfully penned, WRW. Excellent write with great wordplay and flow my friend. Nicely done. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Now that is depressing. I feel sorry for him. Watching porn through Cataracs. That sucks lol