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Read MoreOn the 5th,the myth of the ghostships returnsadrift,unhurried,moving with the slow authorityof things that have forgottenwhat it means to have a destination. They glide across the inner horizon,full of voids and echoesfrom the beginnings of time,carrying the dust of ancient...
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Thanks, Fia, appreciate you!
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Brilliantly penned, PAR. Excellent write again my friend. Keep these stories flowing brother another amazing read. I dig this one a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, Damiano, appreciate you.
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
April 5th, Ghostships Drift Through the Mind
On the 5th,
the myth of the ghostships returns
adrift,
unhurried,
moving with the slow authority
of things that have forgotten
what it means to have a destination.They glide across the inner horizon,
full of voids and echoes
from the beginnings of time,
carrying the dust of ancient…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Pretty cool poem, PAR. As I read, I felt some of the verses had the feel of a Pablo Neruda texture. April 5th is here and the poetry is honestly flowing. -Curt
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Thank you, Neruda is one of my favourite poets, Fernando Pessoa and Florbela Espanca are my top influences.
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Read MoreAuthor’s Note:Inspired by “The Call To Adventure”, by JoshBond. To me, the underlying message is to do freedom responsibly. For me, this involves a mindfulness of both the internal and the external. In this poem, Josh incorporates subtle, irregular...
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You had a full poem and you broke it up to have omitted pieces. Interesting concept
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Read MoreIf I could take All of your tears I'd form from themAn ocean On which nobody Would dare sail It would be yours To flow free upon A current That never fails A wave The never breaks From tears The world cannot shake And waterfalls That drown the sadness Of years lost In the whirlpool Being...
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An ocean that no one would dare to sail. An ocean of my own tears. Well that is something. I like this;))
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Very happy this spoke to you Fia. Thank you for reading! 🙂
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What a beautiful concept. It’s funny how often we sink under the weight of our pain. To think of tears as an ocean of our own making and subject to our own belief is beautiful
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Thank you Willow. I am glad the beauty in this ocean resounds.
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Beautifully penned, Brandon. I concur with Fia and Willow. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you good sir!
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Read MoreIn a hotel room far from herethere was a perfect version of you and mewe ate instant noodlesand looked out at the purple winter skyline You let me talk and talk and talk and for one night I was free...
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oh wow beautiful Indie this hurts…I have such illusions and I still hold onto them even when proven wrong by others hugs great write ❤️
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Thank you so much, Bren ❤️
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That ending is like a gut punch. Lovely write.
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Thank you Fia 🙂
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I remember writing once “images of you and me never equal any semblance of we.” This caught my breath and took me back to that moment. I agree with Fia, those last lines are powerful and painful.
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Thank you so much Willow. It’s not a good way to feel at all.
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“OUCH”. Agree with those above, it is a very powerful write and painful to read and know it happens far too often. -Curt
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Thank you Curt 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Indie. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. That ending was painful indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian, appreciate it 🙂
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Traumatic
Hard to recognize when they sell you out.Keep punching Indie ..
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Thank you xx
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The pain of knowing betrayal. It’s shattering. Thank you for sharing your poem.
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This gives an eerie vibe here and I like the feel of it.