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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhen calloused hands touch skinShivers cascade throughNot wanting to break the spellFelt as if this moment was meant for youLooking into the depths of blacknessSeeing the care and wantWant to remove all the sadnessUnderstanding flows through that I can’tSeconds...
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Thank you. Appreciate that. been a busy week for me
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nothing wicked about this, but the sadness of it hits home here.
you display strength and insight.
thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, Jim;))
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Yes a little sad but we think of life as a little calloused and the piece fits. Tight
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Thank you, ME;))
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Chère F.,
My heart jumps up a little, when I see you’ve posted one of your beautiful writes.
And this one is a wake up call for me. I’ve never given much thought about my hands as is done here.
It reminds me to work harder in my allotment garden.
An allotment garden on the edge of Amsterdam? Some people have all the luck huh?Great poem.
I’ll be looking out for the next one.
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thank you, Gus😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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While the reader can not fail to get the message that both runs throughout and underpins this epic post, the penultimate and summative lines are surely to die for .. Write on sister F .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Thank you, Neville 😊
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Such a bittersweet piece. The ache and yearn…and the stepping back. Totally felt
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Thank you, Willow 😊
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This is some vivid, intense scenery you painted here, Fia
Your words flowed very well for my eyes to follow and my mind to absorb.
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Thank you Naaj:))
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Magnificently sensual and breathtakingly passionate. I could feel this encounter unfold through your vivid and powerful telling that brought me into the depths of the hearts of these lovers. And that closing with the calloused hand withdrawing made for an ending to be remembered, my friend.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Read MoreThey tell the story of a maiden.Some say she was as fair as can be.Some say she was young. Or died as old as one can be.They say one day,her soul fell into a deep sleep.For nights on end,she would...
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Tight rhyming
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Damian DeadLove and
Light💕 are now friends
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redzone wrote a new post
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Read MoreRandom Thoughts About You I. The blood streaked across my eye pooling into a pencil point, but acting like it wanted to fight. Instead, it faded, then said goodbye, As you walked out the door. II. The wind whipped across the deck like it was in a hurry...
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest poet I feel you on this interesting note my children are Aztec as was my ex…he is registered with tribe I never registered my children…I feel for your pain ❤️
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Thank you for visiting Crimsin. One of my long ago ancestors was part of the Native American tribe that inhabited Manhattan when the Dutch arrived. May I ask why you never registered your children as Aztec and into the tribe? Are you Native American?
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no I’m not Native American my ex was we don’t know where he currently is he wanted to register them when they were little but we didn’t do it now the kids need their day to register or go through a lot of red tape as there are large somes of money invoved…they are not asking for that just to be recognized…
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Profound pain does this… when nature seems to reflect all your feelings and You also can’t enjoy anything of it. it’s like two opposite things, the nurture sharing your pains and nature is also going against You. “Random Thoughts About You” is a perfect title, the shattered mind and heart… one thought here, another there, one feeling is here another there… perfect song too, I love Kim Wild version of it. written well with feelings of numbness and emptyness being expressed and delivered clearly. Peace 🕊️ and happiness 💕 my friend.
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Hi Light. I appreciate your comment. I remember Kim Wilde’s version of this song. A more “upbeat” style. While I do like the Vanilla Fudge version, my favorite is still the Supremes’ original. Their version is also more upbeat compared to Vanilla Fudge. Anyway, thanks again for your kind review.
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I share your pain .. but then, I doubt you will be surprised .. nevertheless I am glad I came by this way .. you just helped me make more sense of myself and my world so ya did .. Wishing you well is becoming a reflex my friend .. kindest regards, Neville 👍👍
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Hey there Neville, you are always welcome to walk through my poems. I am glad that this one helped you “make sense of your world, and yourself”. Perhaps now you could shed some light on my jumbled mess. 😕
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Powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas
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Ms. Mary, what a treat to have you comment on one of my poems. So, you think I’m organized, huh? Not if you saw my notebooks. 🤔😂 But I want to make a deal: I’ll be good to me, if you’ll be good to you. 🌹
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What a lovely piece of writing Fia. Great rhymes, outstanding flow.