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thank you graciously beautiful poetess I deeply appreciate your thoughts on the nuances of the poem 💕you made me smile and touched my heart…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously for reading and leaving a thoughtful comment 💕
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Read Moretwas daylight that ushered the darkness inwhen she on a sleepy day did sinsecreting my thoughts and dreaded deedon halted breath my wickedness shownsilently the storm brew coming without warningclouds of mistrust formed in the eyes peering at memy...
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Oh wow… I’d call this epic poetry because it tells a story. It’s also confessional.
I love this kind of naughty stuff, Crimsin. Riveting!-
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hello lovely Kitten good morning thank you graciously 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Great storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian yeah just a bit of fiction I appreciate you too 💕
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Described ‘the black dog’ perfectly.
Sleep well
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hello dearest Benny good evening thank you graciously for reading and commenting with such an apt description of depression I’d never heard that expression before 💕
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I think it was how Winston Churchill described his depression.Most folks down under use it as a euphemism for depression.
Take care 😘
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You really nailed this diagnosis, girl.
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hello beautiful Kitten you are appreciated thank you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hi dearest Damian good afternoon thank you graciously 💕
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So many parts missing
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hello dearest poet yes sadly thank you 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good afternoon thank you for reading and leaving a kind comment 💕
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Superb work.
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hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously for reading and commenting 💕
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Hugely complex piece and I love the pic. I like how you use color to reflect emotion. Some great alliteration in this piece and the rare use of personification as well. It highlights the inner struggle as the body continues to persevere. Deep, tantalizing, thought provoking.
xoxo