Vivid and sharp.

Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.

And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!

Daniel

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Every one of us has the power to heal & to harm within us. It’s which course we choose to follow that separates the healers from the rest. Beautiful, Brenda 🧡

my faith perhaps is not as strong as others though I do know God I struggle with suffering thank you for your thoughts 💕

Great write Brenda.
I now realise that pain is quite different from suffering.Most, if not all, our suffering arises in the mind…..
that’s also where peace hangs out.
💋

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello lovely Mary good evening thank you beautiful lady most graciously for being so kind 💕

good morning beautiful poetess thank you graciously from us both it was a pleasure to create with him I’m happy you found it pleasing 💕

This is woven beautifully

To me, this poem has shadings of Edgar Allan Poe’s, Alone. Well done 🌼

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Tim good evening I love your interpretation thank you 💕

We’re all mad here, friend.

Great ink