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    immortal

    it's all relevant to our magicsome spill sweet endeavors from their lipsothers from their swaying hipsheeding no warning, just letting go tasting the aether and spinshadows swirl, and the mists enteryou and I are part of the skywe are a...

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    • It sounds like you’re describing the perfect world where imagination is just a word on earth, but means so much more in the world you describe.

      • hello dearest Tim I wrote this last night while listening to and watching this video there I imagine the boys are learning magic it makes me think of the book where the wild things are and the place they is so magical looking thank you for showing love for this write 💕

    • thank you graciously beautiful poetess I love your response 💕

    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend, spectacular imagery. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian I’m happy you liked this one I did too thank you graciously 💕

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    covet

    taste the energy as it wraps around yousinging to your soul a sirenborn of darkness and lusttipping things in my favorrevealing enough to tantalizebut not to drive insanemysterious minx with a passionlooking at you through the mistsa tingle shivers...

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    strange

    creative flaw or simple geniusmy soul is differentbut I wonder if similar qualities can be found in Godfrightful honesty, I see the same snag in humanitysome are streamlined and sleak to look at but get to know them and...

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      • hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously sometimes I wonder if my writes aren’t strange but you have to go as inspired I’m happy this spoke to you 💕

    • WHEN I SAY I FELT THIS, IT MEANS
      I THIS EVERY EVERY WORD OF YOUR VOICE…BUT THIS RIGHT HERE, OOUUFF!

      “truthfully I fail in this mission every day
      with small steps forward
      becoming the companion that was first desired”

      DAMN IT WOMAN!

    • that didn’t come out right, emotionally everywhere but you know what mean, ha!

      • hello dearest poet thank you graciously good evening I wasn’t sure how this one would be accepted I’m so happy it spoke to you 💕 and yes I think your comment was great and I understood 😊

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. I think it’s something everybody fails at, myself included. It’s not meant to be easy, and sometimes are human nature gets the best of us. Very introspective write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you graciously dearest Damian for understanding I hate like for example when I am short tempered I have to work on this 💕

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    silence

    silence golden and true speaks loudest at three amwhen all the world is quiet and you are alone with your painmemories surface in your little mind theaterplaying reel to reel guiltof all the people you let down somehowall of...

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    • The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.

      *Hug* you’re not alone, friend.

      • hello dearest Nick good morning I think as we get older because for one thing I know I was fearless and careless when I was younger..now I am careful and cautious understanding each moment is important thank you for the love here hugs on our shared pain in the night 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write as always my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    breathe

    insidious greed, the needful wayit is in us all to wantsomething tangible we can seebut on the aether breatheit is the spirit of lovethat is a sigh or an exhale awaybeginning with something as simple as a whispera piercing...

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    • Hoi hoi
      There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.

      And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
      Very nice write. Thank you!
      Kind regards, Gus

      • hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕

    • This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!

      Daniel

    • Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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