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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend, spectacular imagery. Appreciate you.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. I think it’s something everybody fails at, myself included. It’s not meant to be easy, and sometimes are human nature gets the best of us. Very introspective write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.
*Hug* you’re not alone, friend.
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
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It sounds like you’re describing the perfect world where imagination is just a word on earth, but means so much more in the world you describe.