Vivid and sharp.

Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.

And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus

This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!

Daniel

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Every one of us has the power to heal & to harm within us. It’s which course we choose to follow that separates the healers from the rest. Beautiful, Brenda 🧡

Even with faith we will still struggle. I guess pain is a part of life when it comes. For many, faith has its benefits and joys. For others it’s a fantasy made up by humans. I suppose our minds and how we think plays a big part.

Great write Brenda.
I now realise that pain is quite different from suffering.Most, if not all, our suffering arises in the mind…..
that’s also where peace hangs out.
💋

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello lovely Mary good evening thank you beautiful lady most graciously for being so kind 💕

good morning beautiful poetess thank you graciously from us both it was a pleasure to create with him I’m happy you found it pleasing 💕

This is woven beautifully

To me, this poem has shadings of Edgar Allan Poe’s, Alone. Well done 🌼

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Stellar imagery my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very dark and eerie but interesting. I’m getting a dark witch feel from this one, almost like a Salem witch on the eve of her death. Great read, Crimson.