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Read Morewell…that’s that?no trumpetno light at the end of the tunnelno heavenly slideshow of my greatest hits?I figured there’d at least be musicwhat did you do with all that noisethat I died in? You make me laughYou complain of the noiseI...
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![Profile picture of twofiftythree]()
thank you for invitin me to
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I enjoyed the back and forth.
I could recognize both of your styles while reading!
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Thank you, Adel. It was fun
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much appreciated. it was an interestin write. always enjoy way fia challenges me…gets me to write shit I don’t usually think to.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, 253 & Fia. Excellent collaboration you two, the back and forth created such an intense tension in the dialogue. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Death was a real piece of work. lol
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thanks Damian. yep…death wasn’t puttin up with my bullshit.
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“PHEW!!!” 😳
A phenomenal work, by two master raconteurs engaged in a seamlessly harmonious flow of futilely controversial “give ‘n take” combat, leading naught but to eventual death. BUT, what a ride until arrival … WOW!
You two pulled ouit all the stops,virtually singing the sensitive layers off my bardically envious receptors; I mean, who wouldn’t wish they could write like THAT … sheesh, You Two!!!
Creative, original, and without doubt a piece to stash away for many rereads.
I could keep pontificating over this concerted effort, but lest I wear my welcome thin, let me close with a genuinely sincere, “Thanks for the privilege, Fia ‘n Dru.”Gobsmacked! ⁓ Richard🖌
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreI haven't been home in a while. It still looks the same. The fake facade that everything is bright and beautiful when the beauty is an illusion, hiding all the decay. Anyone who has a heightened sense of smell...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent storytelling as always my friend. The final battle was intense. Seems like a bittersweet ending to me. Even in death the mother left a mark. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I thought about that even the evilest of parents may have one streak of kindness left.
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Ouch’ that’s taking mother love a tad too far methinks .. Just who’s side are you on he asked? Matricide, she replied .. Just ripe for Halloween my queen🩸🖤🐦⬛🐦⬛🦇🦇😎👍
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You are correct, my friend. I was trying my hand at writing darkness. lol I am not good at it, but it wrapped it up neatly. Thank you, <3
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A very engaging story.
Troubling and sinister.
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Thank you, Knight;))
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Read MoreOn Halloween our lane travels to many a year agoelectricity it vanishesand only the hearths and candles glow Gaslights burn dim and wise where vehicles no longer park trees grow twice their size beneath the moonlit dark Sidewalks revamp themselves in brick the leaf strewn...
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hello dearest poet a beautiful Halloween it is you’ve captured the spirit with a masterful flow I’m dressing up today to be part of the fun ❤️
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Thank you for the read and comment, my friend. I hope you have an enchanted time!
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Sam Nash wrote a new post
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Read MoreBlood sucking humans, we are all Down to hell’s darkest we should fall All our days are hollowed we ween Killing in the name of love and of deen Angles have left us to sing and pray To the one who’s game we think...
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hello dearest Sam I think demons were created with purpose have a different society perhaps even older than us great thought provoking write ❤️
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
I agree with Crimsin. Thanks for sharing Sam.
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Now you invite the demons to dinner. I still didn’t get an invitation. lol
This is a good piece, Sam
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This sounds so good. Your writing is amazing.
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Thank you so much Fia! 🙏🏻
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This is an amazing accomplishment, my friend. All of the references to technology, and the way you use them is like candy — so sweet and perfect. I just want to stop for a moment and admire phrases like, “We’re floppy disks in the age of air,” or, “The signal fades like a VHS tape,”and so many others. So beautiful in so many ways: the words, the music all meld into a magical achievement. Why the hell aren’t you famous?
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Thank you FlatDaddy! I wanted to write something fun and light. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Enjoyed it? I jumped up and kissed the screen! Okay, I didn’t do that, but I could have. Just marvelous work.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Drieks. Amazing lyrics my friend loved the technological wordplay. Excellent work as always with the arrangement. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian 🙏🏻
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FD said I had to come, listen/read your words. I am so glad I did. Loved the word play, the technology references, damn, the whole song. Many snaps and a bag of chips!!!
Curt
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Hey there Curt! Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to me 🙏🏻
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
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Thank you for collaborating with me. It was fun