I’m glad I befriended you….nice observational piece….oh to be a cashmere sweater now that spring is here.

A little bit of rhyme is kind and sublime and stirs the mind….
You always deliver dk …

BIG LIKE

I’ll be your humper…

And I know you’re not an idiot…
I’m having so much fun thinking about you at night

I bet I fit you nicely

Such a vision

You come up with fantastic imagery

You nailed it.

Yeah, well… one of my fantasy creations… if you’d like to saddle up! Thank you for reading, Adagio!

LOL. Is that a motherly mmm hmmm or someone with a naughty mind?

I’m glad you didn’t drown, baby. I have plans to smother you.

I like the innocents to this. Great ink, friend.

Haha, well that was most of my school life back in the days.

Fia you showed her you are a masterful writer to bad she didn’t encourage that probably jealousy 💕

Tremendous work.

Beautifully penned, Fia. Appreciate you.

Damian

I don’t know how I missed this one.
Each line she “corrected” with her red pen will echo: It’s Alive, Fia. “)

Poweful work and great rhyme. Excellent.

Thanks, girl! I like to make my own entertainment when the lights go down!

Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme

Tight ink Have a great day!!

Bat

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.

Damian

Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.

John

Well said, beautifully penned.

Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.