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Read Moreripped from the mouth of sound a gapin holewhere hammer should break bone hands dropivory grindin under skinsilence echos where it used to strike scale shattersedges crackinbroken teeth in the dark chords crawl forwarddraggin themselvesthru blood and tone I slam the weight downagainagainas...
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appreciate it
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![Profile picture of Rosie C]()
I like the brutal choice on words.
I can sense a lot of toughness from the writer.
This is slightly mentally challenging in a way that captivates the reader.
Ready for some more…
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thank you Rosie
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“chords crawl forward
draggin themselves
thru blood and tone”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend it always gets interesting when the piano is mentioned in your work. So many great lines but the one above just spoke to me. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you Damian…always an easier write when involve piano.
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Damian DeadLove and
Brandon Houser are now friends
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A musical genius. Prince was just built different when it comes to talent and creativity my friend. Awesome song, the whole soundtrack is amazing. Also I’m a fan of the movie. Morris Day playing his rival as the frontman of “The Time”. So many memories. Appreciate you – Damian
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Love the movie too watched so much could almost have recited everyone’s part
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Read Morehere I am... standing in the ashes... of what you thought burnt to the ground but for one tiny detail... you might have won thing is this... the only thing you burned... was a bridge I remain...though changed and you no longer have access you are no rival... for the...
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Damn..Willow “the only thing you burned… was a bridge.. I remain” That statement right there is power. love it
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Thank you, Fia 😊
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The cycle of love, Love’s Phoenix, tight
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Thank you 😊
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Straight {from the ash}
Pure dopeness!!Much respect
Naaj
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😂 Hah! 😂 Nice reference! She had some spunk…still does! Thank you, Naaj 😊
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I love this revenge piece!
It’s bold, daring and powerful.
I embrace your inner strength throughout the stanzas.
I’m totally hooked…
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Thank you, Rosie 😊
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There’s a grit here that tastes like smoke and victory—scorched bridges and unbroken will.
I love how it doesn’t just rise from ashes; it struts, unafraid, daring the past to even try again.-
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You perfectly nailed how I was feeling when I wrote this! Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Cowards die a thousand times but the courageous only once.
Courage you don’t lack and that is reflected in this uplifting piece.
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Thank you, Peter 😊
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hello beautiful Willow I don’t know who is trolling you but this is badass ❤️
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He is of no consequence now. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write but I expect nothing less from you my friend, and you always deliver the goods. The grit as Thomas put it, is chef’s kiss.. You hit this one out of the park! Like a phoenix you have risen from the ashes. I like in the movie “Death To Smoochy” when the one guy said: “I’ve risen like a beautiful Phoenix, or some other town in Arizona!” lol. I’ll get more marshmallows for the bonfire my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Maybe we could have hot cocoa with our flaming marshmallows? I got lots of kindling over here. Keep bringing the marshmallows. We’re good for a long while, my friend 😊
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Thank you 😊
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I concur with Fia when I say Damn! The power and freedom in this is palpable! Damning and wonderful. One hell of a read!
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Sometimes you just gotta leave them smoldering. Thank you, Brandon 😊
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The “cut it off, cut it all the way off ” Just screams “I don’t want this anymore” This holds a lot emotion