You know…

non taken, I know exactly what you mean.. but still, she knows…

You make me smile

This is so confusing, Adira. I’m glad you figured it out.

I love the way you write about us.

Thank you, Adira! Thanks for reading!

You two should get a room…

It’s so wonderful to be with you again, HJ! Thank you for being with me!

Now, you’ve gone and made me all wet…

None expected…

Filled with the desire to live life fully unburdened by guilt and sorrow. A truly grand ode to a higher power. Very strong emotions made into an eloquent poem.

John

The first two verses were incredble hard to top.
But you maintained your intensity.
I often find verses scream out to me when I read peoms.

“A defective part of some bigger machine.”

hello lovely poetess thank you graciously ❤️

hello dearest poet I deeply appreciate your thoughts thank you graciously ❤️

Superb work. Powerful.